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“Beyond the Briar” Dystopian Fantasy Short Story by Marco Etheridge

"Beyond the Briar" Dystopian Fantasy Fiction by Marco Etheridge

In the almost forgotten times that wrought the after-years, the world and its weather changed, bringing storm and famine, war and famine, drought and famine. Nations were riven and destroyed. Petty warlords fought for smaller and smaller fiefs until farm and town were made desolate and the people fled. The scattered survivors were oppressed by hunger and hardship, fire and want. The after-years created devastation and loosed upon the land the wanderers, the hunters, and the displaced soldiers of fortune.

So it chanced that one such soldier trudged the dog end of a long road at the gloaming of a day in spring. Behind him, the sun slipped to the rocky hills he had just descended. The dying rays illuminated skeletons of burned-out trees that lined the empty path. His elongated shadow stretched far ahead on the broken, grass-choked pavement.

The lone man strode after his shadow with a loose gait. He stood tall, lean, and wolfish. He was not young. Four decades he bore, and his face was lined. A heavy rucksack and quiver hung from his shoulders, and he carried in his hand a longbow of yew.

His self-given name was Adam, from a book his aunt read to him as a child. Adam Damned, if any dared to ask his surname. Few did. Adam Damned was an archer, a marketable trade now that guns and the bullets that fed them had vanished into obscurity. His loyalties were for sale to any prince who could pay his wages and fill his belly.

The cracked roadway ran down to an open valley and the ruins of a town. It was once a thriving place astraddle the meeting of two highways. Now, the roads were empty ribbons, and the town inhabited by ghosts. A few scroungers lived amongst the ruins, trading worthless junk and bartering for a mean existence.

The name of the town was Consequences.

Adam Damned reached the edge of the town as night fell over it. Empty doors and windows gaped dark and blind from either side of the road. There were no human sounds, only the rustling and creeping of nocturnal creatures. He did not stop to hunt, for he already carried fresh meat to barter. A feeble light glimmered at the distant end of the street and a wheezing sort of music reached his ears.

Adam walked on. The light became a glow, and the stumbling pulse of the music grew louder. He stepped from the darkness into the circle of light. The music ceased as if cut from the air with a knife.

A woman sat upon the steps of a red brick hotel. Paired candle lanterns hung from the hotel doorway, dropping a flickering light over the seated woman.

She might have been forty or sixty. Impossible to tell in that light. Her bare arms were lean as twisted rope, and she held a battered concertina in her lap. The woman cocked her head and smiled. Her teeth were strong and white. Her hair was silvered, but by age or candlelight, Adam could not tell.

His hunter’s eyes searched the light and the blackness beyond, but no one did he see. He turned his eyes back to the woman.

“I wish you a good evening.”

She chuckled at his words.

“A fine wish, but empty of promise. Still, I thank you. Welcome to Consequences.”

Adam felt the weight of his rucksack and the hunger in his belly. He pointed to the sign illuminated by the candle lanterns.

“Is there room at the inn?”

The woman laughed and swept a hand through the air.

“This whole damn town is vacant, stranger. Empty rooms for the taking.”

“I’ve walked far. I prefer somewhere with a hot stove and a warm pallet.”

The woman rubbed her chin and held her hand out, palm up.

“You’ve goods to barter, then?”

“I have. Two fat snakes, fresh today, and a flask of grappa.”

She stood herself straight and tall. The concertina unfolded with a groan.

“Step inside, stranger. Let’s see to your belly and bed.”

*  *  * 

The plates were polished clean and the table bare before Adam dug the flask from his rucksack. The woman who called herself Maude sat across the table, younger now in the soft light of tallow candles. A third figure sat on a stool beside the table, an idiot boy of twenty years or so. If he had a name, no one knew it. Maude called him Boy.

“Will the boy drink?”

“He will. A small one won’t hurt him.”

Adam nodded, uncorked the flask, and poured. Two full drams for himself and Maude, a short pour for the boy. Maude reached for her drink and raised it. The boy aped her, a lopsided grin on his face. Then Adam raised his own glass. They nodded, drank, and grimaced against the fiery liquor.

“Whew! That will liven a girl.”

“Another then?”

Maude nodded and Adam poured. He stoppered the flask and set it aside. He pushed his empty plate aside and leaned his elbows on the table.

“I thank you for the meal, Maude.”

The woman bowed her head in a mockery of courtesy.

“You did not lie, traveler. Those were fine, fat snakes. The deal is square. You’re a guest under my roof, at least for this night.”

“Then I must think of the morrow. What chance of employment in these parts?”

“None in this shithole of a town. You came out of the West. You saw how empty the land is. Two days’ walk to the North lies the territory of a warlord. Payton is his name. The same distance south will bring you to another band of thugs led by a man named Jackson. One as bad as the other, and both looking for men.”

“And this town stuck between the two?”

“They leave us alone. Everything there is to take has been taken. Consequences has no more to give.”

“Us? There are others?”

“Of course, there are others. They’re shy of fighters. You with your longbow, I expect you scared them off. You’ll see them tomorrow.”

The boy erupted in gurgling chuckles.

“What lies to the East?”

“A road you do not want to tread. It leads to an evil place ringed by a tangled hedge of briar. Thorns like claws and sharp as daggers. The hedge guards the past and kills every fool who tries to pierce it.”

Adam drank off half his grappa and winced.

“Another of the old tales. I have heard something like this before. Tell me the rest to pass the rest of the evening.”

Maude shook her head, and her smile disappeared from her face.

“Very well but mind your scorn. Old is not the same as false.”

Then she began to tell the tale.

*  *  *

 It happened when my grandmother was just a small girl, before the great storms and fires. A band of strangers came to this town. It wasn’t called Consequences back then. The strangers seemed to be rich. They bought up the lands east of town and started building. They named their new settlement Paradise. Some of the townsfolk called it a cult, but they said it quiet. The newcomers spent hard cash for goods. Cult or not, folks were glad for the trade.

A young married couple led the pilgrims at Paradise, their king and queen in a way. By all accounts, they were beautiful and wise. The commune prospered under their rule. Homes were built, crops planted, and babies conceived. But not for the queen. She remained childless despite her hopes, the king’s desire, and the chanted dreams of all those in Paradise.

One still summer afternoon, the queen fell asleep on the banks of the stream that watered Paradise. A frog came to her in a dream and told her that her wish would come true. The talking frog promised that within the year, the queen would have a child.

The dream became reality. The queen gave birth to a beautiful baby girl. When their daughter was one year old, the king planned a great feast and festival to celebrate. There would be food and music and special rituals that brought visions of the future.

The feast ran long into the summer twilight. Special wines were passed amongst the elders of Paradise, and small trays of peyote buttons, bitter to the tongue. While the others sang and danced, the wise ones ate the peyote, drank the wine, and waited.

The moon rose in the night sky and the first elder with it. The music ceased and the dancers stilled. All listened as the wise ones bestowed their visions. One by one they stood, offering their gifts to the girl child of the king and queen. One spoke of beauty, another of riches to come, yet another of the virtues the child would inherit.

But all was not well. One of the wise ones fell upon his back, writhing and moaning. When the others tried to assist him, he leaped to his feet, eyes wide and staring. He cried out the words of his vision, and they were dire.

‘When the girl reaches fifteen years, she will feel the sting of life, and life will leave her and all those who dwell with her.’

Then the man fell on his face as if dead. Frightened hands carried his rigid body from the commons.

Under the canopy of the summer stars, the people stared in shocked silence. The king sprang to his feet in anger. The queen’s face blanched deathly pale. But one elder remained who had not yet spoken. She smiled at those assembled and spread her hands wide.

‘I cannot unsay this awful vision, but I can soften it, perhaps. Death shall not be the fate of this beautiful princess, but rather sleep, the sleep of a century. A brave kiss shall awaken her if such kiss can find its way to her sleeping lips.’  

The years passed and the little princess grew into a lively, curious child. Her father did everything he could to protect his daughter from the sting of life. Sharp objects were removed from the household. The princess never heard any news of sadness or loss, for these things were banished.

All the good visions came to pass. The princess was a beautiful, virtuous, good-natured girl, so full of joy that all who knew her loved her.

Her fifteenth birthday drew near. Paradise had grown with the princess. The little commune was now a thriving community, and all the inhabitants busied themselves with preparations for the birthday of the princess.

At last, the special day arrived. The king and queen were busy with preparations for the birthday party. The princess was left alone to do as she pleased. She roamed around the compound, stopping to pet the sheep, or speak with the burly blacksmith.

Back in the very farthest corner of the compound, she came to a building she did not know. She slipped past double doors and stepped into a large workroom.

It was a magical place the likes of which the girl had never seen. A dozen young women sat at wheels and spindles, spinning flax into yarn. On the other side of the room, men and women worked at looms, weaving the flax yarn into linen cloth.

The princess was enchanted with the clatter and clack of the looms, and the delightful rattle of the wheel and spindle. She wished to learn everything about this magical process.

The women were delighted by the chance to teach the princess to spin flax. They sat the princess on a stool, but when the girl reached for the spindle, she pricked her finger and felt the sting.

 In that moment, the princess fell into a swoon. The weavers carried the girl back to her chambers. Their steps were slow, for they felt a great weariness slipping over them.

They laid the girl on her maiden bower and pulled the coverlet to her chin. Then the grieving weavers and spinners went in search of the king and queen, but they never found the girl’s parents.

Before they could impart their dire news, weariness captured them. Their eyelids drooped and close. A deep sleep fell over the compound and all that dwelt there. The king and queen slept, as did every inhabitant of Paradise. The blacksmith at his forge and the shepherdess by her flock, each fell fast asleep. The horses slept in their stables, the sheep in their pens, the dogs in the yard, and the birds on the branches. All was silent. Not a leaf stirred.

As Paradise slept away the seasons, a thorny hedge of briar grew up all around the compound, surrounding it with a tangled wall. With each passing year, the hedge grew higher and the thorns longer, until it was a grasping, deadly peril, thrice the height of the tallest man.

The tale went far and wide of a beautiful princess trapped in a thorny prison. There were riches and glory for any brave lad who freed the poor girl from her enchantment. The spell could only be broken when a lone warrior breached the evil hedge and awakened the princess with a brave kiss.

And so it was that the brave sons of rich men and paupers, and not a few daughters as well, came to test their strength and skill against the thorny hedge that imprisoned the princess.

Many tried, and many failed. They were young and brave, but they were foolish. They hewed their way into the hedge and were swallowed by it. The hooked thorns of the hedge were sharp as an eagle’s talon, strong as the claws of a great bear.

The doomed young men and women were pinioned by the grasping vines, which moved as living serpents. Deadly thorns tore their young flesh. The malignant briar hedge captured each one of the brave fools, bound them with tendrils and vines, pierced their flesh with thorns, and bled the life from them. They died a miserable death.

*  *  * 

Her tale told, Maude leaned back in her chair. The candles guttered in an unseen draught, and shadows wavered across the table.

Adam raised his glass and tossed off the last of the grappa. The empty glass rapped loud against the wooden table.

“Another wild tale about the sorrow of young fools. Bravery and foolishness are bound together. I’ve seen many dead fools after a battle, each of them stiff as boards and cloaked in their bravery.”

Maude leaned forward and stared into his eyes.

“You do not believe the tale?”

“My belief has nothing to do with it. It may be true. Perhaps one day I will go and see this damned briar hedge with my own eyes.”

“I would argue against you.”

Adam Damned smiled at this silver-haired woman.

“Would you indeed, Maude? Well, there is no need. Tomorrow I will go to the North. It is work I need, not foolish errands.”

He reached a strong hand to his rucksack and hoisted himself from his chair.

“Has my barter bought me breakfast?”

“It has. I will show you to your pallet.”

She rose and led him from the darkening kitchen. The man and woman retired, each to their own bed, leaving the idiot boy to sleep beside the dying warmth of the stove.

Adam Damned awakened to the crack of an ax and the thump of wood against earth. He threw off the quilts, stepped to the window, and peered into the dawn. In the yard below, the idiot boy was splitting kindling for the morning fire. The blade of his ax flashed in the rays of the rising sun.

Hunger gnawed at his belly, as it did every morning he had ever known. He splashed his face in a basin of cold water, dressed himself, and descended to the kitchen.

Maude knelt before the old iron stove, stoking a fire. She wished him a good morning without turning, intent on her task. Adam seated himself at the table and waited. Boy clumped into the kitchen with an armload of split firewood.

Breakfast was pungent sage tea and a bowl of porridge. As he took the first spoonful into his mouth, a warm sweetness danced over Adam’s tongue. Surprise raised his eyebrows and Maude caught the look.

“Agave honey. Boy gathers it. He’s a wonder with the bees. They’ll chase me half a mile, but he’s never stung.”

Boy grinned at Maude and shoveled mush into his mouth.

When he departed, Adam left all the food he could spare. He called it an advance on future lodging. Maude accepted the barter without comment. With the rucksack lighter on his shoulders, Adam marched away to the North, intent on selling his bow to the warlord named Payton.

*  *  *

Six weeks the bowman served Payton, fighting the marauding bands that dared to challenge the warlord’s territory. He fought well and earned his wages. When the fighting came to an end, Adam Damned took his leave, though his bloody employer entreated the bowman to stay.

Adam left the warlord’s service a richer man, with a promise of future wages in his ear, and booty slung upon the back of a mule. He led the stubborn animal south, a two-day march, until he reached Consequences. He slipped past the town by moonlight of the second night and made his camp to the south.

The warlord Jackson hired Adam on sight, just as Payton had. One long look at the bowman served to establish his credentials. Adam killed in Jackson’s service every day for a long month, his arrows felling all who dared to stand against him.

Adam gathered his blood wages and departed for the North. The mule bore a heavy load, packs lashed and bound with newly plaited chord. Coils of horsehair rope hung from the packs. The mule strained and balked under the weight of blood wages. Adam kept a tight grip on the animal’s lead rope.

Two days later, as night fell over the town, Adam Damned walked back into the ruined town. He paced up the empty street. The weary mule plodded behind, balking now and then in a half-hearted way.

Ahead, Adam saw the flickering candle lanterns hanging from the hotel doorway. Maude sat on the stairs, torturing her wheezing concertina. Boy sat beside her. The mule snorted and Maude looked toward the sound. He saw a smile crease her face. Boy pointed, gurgling his unintelligible talk.

He stepped into the circle of light. Maude squeezed the last jangled chords from the concertina and dropped her hands to her lap. Silence settled over the street. Then the mule snorted, and Boy resumed his quiet gibbering.

“I see you’re still living.”

“That I am, Maude.”

“And you’ve come back.”

Adam nodded and smiled at her banter.

“I have.”

She set the concertina aside and stood up.

“You’ll be wanting to eat, I suppose. Have you anything to barter, then?”

Adam laughed out loud, and the sound of his laughter filled the street. He pointed to the laden mule.

“I find myself in a good position to barter.”

Maude gave Boy a dig with the toes of her bare foot.

“See to the mule, Boy, and bring the packs into the kitchen. I believe we’re going to feast tonight.”

Boy leaped to his feet and scampered across the pool of light. He stopped in front of Adam and held out his hand. Adam handed Boy the lead rope, and the idiot chortled as he led the mule into the darkness.

Maude waved to the door and Adam stepped forward. He climbed the stairs to stand beside her, looking down into her grey eyes. She gave him a smile and a nod, then pushed the door open with her foot. Her hand snaked around to the small of his back and she gave him a shove.

“Get on with you, then.”

He stepped through the door. Maude snuffed the candle lanterns and followed. The heavy door closed behind her, shutting out the night.

The feast ran long around the kitchen table, and the drink longer. Maude and Adam sat in the over-warm kitchen, flushed and sweating from the rare indulgence of enough food and too much wine. Boy snored from his pallet beside the stove. Soiled dishes and crusted pans soaked in the wash barrel.

Maude swirled the dregs of her wine and raised the glass to Adam. Glass chimed glass in the quiet room. They tilted their heads and drank away the last.

Two empty wine glasses stood sentinel over the table. Maude laced her fingers through Adam’s, or perhaps Adam’s hand clasped Maude’s. Later, they would not remember. They took each other up the stairs to Maude’s bed, where Adam discovered that silver-haired or no, Maude was younger still than he’d imagined.

*  *  *

Adam did not depart the next morning or yet the next. As the days passed, he and Maude and Boy feasted on the perishable food before it spoiled. They hoarded the rest of the booty against future hunger.

Life in Consequences was lean but peaceful. The few wanderers who stopped at the hotel minded their manners. Maude’s stern grey eyes and Adam’s long shadow kept the peace. The furtive inhabitants grew accustomed to Adam, grateful for his longbow.

Adam and Boy roamed the valley and hills. The bowman hunted quail and hare, bringing them down with blunted arrows. Boy gathered honey and collected eggs from hidden nests.

In the evenings, they gathered under the candlelight. A few of the townsfolk grew brave enough to join the circle. Maude tortured her concertina while they clapped and laughed at the noise.

Through the long summer nights, Maude and Adam shared a bed and each other. As the season turned, and the nights grew longer, so too did Adam and Maude grow into something larger than the sum of woman and man alone.

This new existence stood outside anything Adam had ever known. There was love in his life. A strong woman cared for him, and he for her. No one was trying to kill him, and his bow was not for sale. The townsfolk treated him with respect instead of fear.

And yet for all of that, a restlessness nipped at his heels. Adam tried to ignore his nagging thoughts, but they would not be denied. Whispers tempted his ears as he prowled the hills.

You came from the West. You fought in the North and the South. What of the East? Have you forgotten the tale? Are you afraid?

Adam answered the call while pretending not to hear. He hunted further and further to the East, forbidding Boy to follow. Boy whimpered and cried, but Adam ignored him. Maude noted the change between the idiot boy and her hunter. She sensed Adam’s discontent, as one senses a storm building over the edge of the far hills.

When at last he spoke his declaration, his words held no surprise for Maude.

“I will go and see the briar hedge with my own eyes, to know if it is true or no. I am not afraid.”

Sitting across the table, Maude raised her eyes to his, careful with her words.

“And who here ever named you afraid?”

“No one, truly, but this thing gnaws at me. I must go or call myself a coward.”

Maude smashed her fist down and the dishes jumped. Boy whimpered and fled to his sanctuary beside the stove.

“I’d call you a fool, but the words would be wasted. I’m the fool for letting my mouth run away from me. If I’d never told you that stupid tale, you’d have no need of this folly.”

Maude did all she could to dissuade him, both in word and deed. Adam hesitated, his mind torn in a way he had never known. But his hesitation did not last.

Adam hunted still further into the East, for the game seemed more plentiful in that direction. One afternoon, he stood upon the crest of a small knoll. Behind him, the autumn sun slipped toward the horizon. The slanting light etched the land in sharp relief. And in that light, Adam caught his first glimpse of the briar hedge.

A green barrier stretched across the open land before the valley rose to the eastern hills beyond. From a distance, it took on the appearance of a wall fashioned by men, uniform in height. The green wall ran from north to south, then curved back upon itself to form a ring. From his vantage atop the knoll, Adam could not see the far side of the ring, but he did not doubt. This was the briar hedge told of in the legend, and the remains of Paradise lay within.

Adam turned away from the hunt and hurried toward the setting sun. As he walked, he plotted his return, laying plans for his assault on the wall of briar.

Adam Damned left Consequences at sunrise of the following day. He promised to return, but Maude did not hold with empty vows. She watched him go, her eyes dry and flashing with anger. Beside her, Boy blubbered and cried. When he and the mule vanished from sight, Maude turned away. She shoved the sobbing idiot to his chores and set herself to her own.

*  *  *

Adam marched the long day and the mule followed behind, glad for its lighter load. Coils of rope hung from its back, and Boy’s sharp ax lashed above. Man and mule reached the briar hedge as evening fell over the land. Adam made camp in a small grove within sight of the thorny wall.

The sun rose, and Adam set to work. He turned the hobbled mule out to graze and took up the ax. First, he felled two young, straight pines. He limbed the fallen trunks, shearing the trunks down to two stout poles, then lopping the tops. Each pole was thick as a man’s arm and longer than the height of the briar hedge.

Selecting such limbs as were straight and stout, Adam chopped them into rungs. Turning back to the poles, he cut shallow notches at intervals, laying a rung across the paired notches as he worked his way up the poles. The morning was running on to noon when he laid aside the ax.

Using lengths of the plaited rope, Adam lashed the rungs to the poles. With the ladder completed, he turned his attention to the menace of the briar hedge.

The green wall towered above him, adorned in glossy green leaves and armed with cruel thorns, long and sharp as curved daggers. As Adam paced along the thorny hedge, he discovered grim evidence of the legend’s truth.

Grey-white bones gleamed from within the tangled vines, full skeletons standing upright, frozen in a grotesque pantomime of hacking and chopping. Not a scrap of flesh remained. The sharp beaks of birds, wind and weather, and the passage of many years had stripped the bones clean. Hard thorns pierced fleshless ribcages and green tendrils grew through empty, gaping eye sockets.

Adam left the foolish dead to their green tomb and turned back to his work. He caught the mule and harnessed it to one end of the ladder. The stubborn animal shied at the awkward load, but Adam coaxed it to the very edge of the briar hedge. Hobbling the mule once more, he set about raising his ladder.

He lifted the near end of the ladder waist high, crouched, and raised himself to his full height. Bracing the ladder with a forked branch, he stepped from beneath it and shook out his limbs. Another forked branch pushed the ladder higher. Adam pushed and braced until the ladder teetered above the height of the hedge. He laid all his weight and strength into the last push, and the ladder toppled forward onto the hedge.

The moment the timber ladder touched the crown of the briar, a violent shudder passed through the green wall. Leaves quivered and thorns rattled as if swept by a sudden storm. Tendrils sprang from the briar hedge. Fast as serpents, thorny vines grew into groping fingers, snaring and binding the poles of the ladder.

Adam stood at the base of the ladder and waited. The briar hedge immobilized the invading ladder, anchoring it more securely than one man could have hoped to. Sensing no more danger, the briar hedge went still, malevolent in its silent brooding.

Nothing moved. Adam waited. There was no sound except the mule’s teeth cropping rough grass. Turning away from the hedge, he walked to his camp.

Adam returned to the ladder prepared for his assault on the briar hedge. In his right hand, he carried the ax. A coil of knotted rope was draped over his shoulder and across his chest. He stood at the base of the ladder, looked up, and began to climb.

He scaled the rungs swift as a hunting cat, his feet leaping from rung to rung. His left hand reached for the next rung while he held the ax ready in his right.

The briar hedge reacted with another angry shudder, but Adam had already gained the last rung. While angry tendrils groped in vain, he made the rope fast to the top of the ladder. He threw the knotted rope and it uncoiled to the ground inside the hedge.

With grasping vines reaching for his boots, Adam tucked the ax into his belt and leaped.

In the next heartbeat, he dangled from the swaying rope. The ladder remained locked tight in the briar’s wooden grip, a strong anchor for rope and man. Adam slid down the knotted line, just out of reach of the briar hedge and its thorny arms. Then he felt the hard ground beneath his boot soles. The hedge was breached. He stepped away from the hedge, pulling the ax free from his belt.

A wide flagstone path led to a patchwork wall made up of the backs of low buildings. A timbered archway guarded a wide opening in the wall. Strange symbols hung from hewn timber above Adam’s head, but there was no gate to bar the way. He did not pause to study the symbols.

Beyond the archway lay a wide common area and a deathly quiet.  Adam stepped forward, his eyes alert and the ax ready at hand. He expected to find ruins, tumbled walls and piles of moldering bones. What he found instead was unlike anything he had ever known.

The first inhabitant he saw was the blacksmith. The big man stood at his forge, hands on the bellows. Adam froze where he was. He waited, but the big man did not move. Scooping a pebble from the ground, Adam tossed the stone onto the overhanging roof above the blacksmith’s head. The rattle and clatter sounded like an avalanche in the stillness. The blacksmith remained still as a statue.

Adam walked into the smithy and stood beside the man. Discarding the patience of the hunter, he poked the man’s thick arm. The flesh felt cool and waxen under his fingertip. Not living skin, and yet not rotting like a corpse. Not alive and not dead.

Shaking his head in wonder, Adam stepped out of the smithy.

As he circled the edge of the commons, Adam felt the pall of sleep that blanketed this place. No birds sang. No dogs barked. He passed a pen of statue sheep, their shepherdess asleep and leaning on her crook. The sleeping corpses were everywhere. They leaned out of windows or sat on stools outside workshops.

Adam moved on. He came to the large building on the far side of the commons, a place that looked like an assembly hall or a church. Inside the shadowed room, a man and woman sat upon a dais, hand in hand, their two carved chairs side by side. Many other statue bodies were scattered around the hall, some seated on cushions, some standing, but all facing the pair on the raised platform.

Leaving the somnambulists, Adam crossed the hall. A double doorway pierced the wall to the right of the platform, and the doors were flung wide. Adam entered, moving into deeper shadows.

Parting a hanging curtain, he stepped into what was obviously a bedchamber. A narrow window allowed a shaft of sunlight to pierce the room. Dust motes hung suspended in the light. In the center of the chamber stood a narrow bed, and on that bed lay a beautiful young woman covered to the throat and bedecked with unwithered flowers.

Even with all he had seen this day, Adam struggled to believe what he saw before his eyes. The princess of legend, the girl of Paradise. Was it all true then?

Adam Damned strode to the bower and leaned over the princess. She was very fair, and yet pale as parchment. No color touched her skin, and no smile creased her lips. Dead and not dead, a perilous beauty waiting for what? The kiss of her prince? He was no king’s son and yet he felt the pull of her cold lips. He stooped, bending his face to hers. One kiss would set this all to rights.

That thought stopped him dead. He stared at those pale eyelids only inches from his own, his warm mouth hovering over her cold lips. He pushed himself upright and took a step back.

There would be no paradise here, no legend sprung to life. The whole thing was a cruel prank, and these sleeping zombies were the butt of the joke. Wake them with a kiss? Wake them to what? They fell asleep thinking they had built their heaven. Would you wake them to face a miserable hell, the cracked and broken world outside the briar hedge? No, better to leave the poor fools to their dreams.

Adam turned away from the sleeping princess and left the bedchamber. He hurried past the royal parents frozen on their thrones, past the gathered court, and out into the still air.

Once outside the building, Adam gulped lungfuls of air. He alone lived and breathed, yet he knew he was the biggest fool in this sleeping paradise.

All his dreams lay one day’s march to the West. Maude, and Boy, shelter and peace. Love, a home, things he had never known. A place to belong to, even the broken town of Consequences.

Leave these poor souls to their dreams. He would go to his.

Adam paced across the wide courtyard, past the sleeping shepherdess and the statue of the blacksmith. He did not pause beneath the archway, did not puzzle over its symbols.

The knotted rope hung from the ladder. He slid the ax into his belt and climbed the rope, hand over hand, boot edges gripping the knots. He pulled himself onto the ladder and swept the ax to hand, ready to battle the briar hedge.

There was no need. The green wall remained as still as the sleepers inside its barrier. No leaf quivered, no tendrils grasped at his feet. He did not stop to wonder but scampered down the ladder and onto the firm earth beyond the briar hedge.

Adam gathered his meager supplies, packed the mule, and removed the animal’s hobbles. He took up the mule’s lead, then looked to the hedge. What of his ladder, a lure for other fools?

The hedge answered him. With a sudden rush, the briar came to life. Hoary branches engulfed the ladder, swallowing it into the green wall. Pole and rung splintered until nothing remained. Only a few raw splinters marked where the ladder had stood. The briar hedge fell silent and still.

Adam Damned turned toward the place he would forever after call home and began to march. The mule followed willingly, not needing to be pulled. Man and mule disappeared into the westering sun, leaving the briar hedge to brood in the solitude of dreams.


Marco Etheridge is a writer of prose, an occasional playwright, and a part-time poet. He lives and writes in Vienna, Austria. His work has been featured in more than eighty reviews and journals across Canada, Australia, the UK, and the USA.“U6 Stories: Vienna Underground Tales” is Marco’s latest collection of short fiction. When he isn’t crafting stories, Marco is a contributing editor and layout grunt for a new ‘Zine called Hotch Potch.

Author website:  https://www.marcoetheridgefiction.com/

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“Ravens Can’t Talk” Fantasy by L. Swartz

"Ravens Can't Talk" Fantasy by L Swartz

Sometimes River talked to Marty, her final human friend, as she walked east up the steep trail behind her house.

“You’d hate what they did to the stream,” River told Marty. “They paved over the part we daylighted and now they’re building townhouses. Can you believe it? Townhouses, here!”

Marty — as stubborn a ghost as she had been a friend — never answered.

Sometimes when River stepped out her door and looked west, she swore she could see Marty waiting for her, solid in teal rain boots regardless of weather. River waved, even though she knew Marty couldn’t wave back.

River and Marty had talked about everything on the way up that long hill — until the cancer got Marty shortly after they celebrated her 82nd birthday. Now it was just River walking, River talking to a ghost.

After Marty, River didn’t try to make new friends.

Young friends talked loudly, as if River were deaf. She wasn’t deaf. The young ones reminded River of their names as if she were demented. She was not. Young ones were careful to only talk about things they thought River was interested in, like their kids or some TV cooking competition. River was interested in astronomy and anarchism and philology and the pre-Columbian indigenous history of the land she lived on; that hadn’t changed when River turned 80.

Friends River’s own age were no better. Even if they didn’t die on her, they were deaf and demented. River got tired of hearing about their grandkids and their TV shows. River got tired of shouting at them and reminding them of her name.

So now River chose to walk alone.

There was always something new to explore in River’s half-wild neighborhood. Downhill, where the river met the ocean, otters sunned themselves on the rows of upended canoes awaiting summer’s tourists. Uphill, the doe River named Tulip, the one with the wound where some long-ago hunter had hit her in the flank, paraded this year’s fawn in front of River. Deep under the canopy of evergreens, a murder of hefty crows hurled good-natured insults at River as she walked through their winter roost.

The deeper River got into her 80s, the more desperately eager she was to breathe every fog-laden breath, touch every scarred bark on every tree, note where a big branch had been torn off by last week’s storm. River always squatted down to check on the sequoia seedlings she had planted, noting their growth, her knees’ protest when she stood up reminding her she’d probably be dead before the seedlings were taller than her.

River felt rich with experience and greedy for more. If only she could have another 20 years, or 30 or 40. She picked up stones from the stream she crossed further up the hill and placed them in circles around her sequoias, practicing a magic she didn’t believe in.

Today, in the meantime, River was alive. On every day when she wasn’t going to die, River was happy with her everyday miracles, free from the baggage of humanity. On lazy days when River skipped her walk, she created her own miracles.

* * *

The little house River had bought at the beginning of her geezerhood came with a shy acre. Half of it was tall trees even older than River. The other half, near her house, was cleared land. River had turned the stupid lawn into a rich buffet of clover and corn and crabapples for the deer and squirrels and birds. The critters knew they were safe with her. River knew they did not mind her watching them through the wavy old glass in her windows.

River had invited the birds first with a few haphazard feeders on the second floor deck. River thought it would be nice to have birds for company while she sipped her coffee at the wobbly metal picnic table. She pictured friendly chirping and graceful flight.

Instead she got Harley Davidson, the harsh-voiced Steller’s jay who demanded more and more peanuts as more and more jays joined him. Soon River was buying peanuts in 20-pound bags, the picnic table was downstairs on the shrinking lawn, and the feeders had taken over the deck, along with planters full of late-blooming pineapple sage for the hummingbirds.

Harley Davidson and his jay friends were first, but not the only visitors. Sweetly gossipy red-winged blackbirds soon joined the impossibly huge crows and the ridiculously patterned towhees. River ordered 50-pound bags of sunflower seeds and cases of suet cakes. Bright goldfinches and flickers and juncos and raspberry-colored finches and red-headed, houndstooth-tailcoated woodpeckers and handsome orange thrushes and squabbling starlings gobbled it all.

Only occasionally did a kestrel or sharp-shinned hawk perch on the peak of the roof and swoop down on an unsuspecting customer at River’s buffet. River grieved, but did not begrudge the raptors their appetite.

Next, Queen Liz, a relentlessly fertile old sow raccoon, led a procession of trash pandas up the posts and onto River’s deck. After a few deliciously successful raids by the raccoons on the peanuts intended for jays and crows, River began to put out dishes of dog food for them.

Queen Liz caught on quickly. She and her kits pressed their hands and faces against the window just before dawn and just after sunset. River obediently filled a dish and handed it to the family. Within a few weeks, all the raccoons in the neighborhood — mostly descendants of Liz, River figured — put River on their route. Sometimes River had to put out two separate dishes to prevent growling generations of raccoons from fighting each other to seize the choicest morsels first.

River tried to attract the local Roosevelt elk herd to her haven by planting aspen and dogwood, but no luck. Even when thinned by hunting season, the herd numbered at least a dozen. River’s human neighbors lived too close to suit the herd.

* * *

Only the boldest neighbor children came near River or her house — visits she suspected were prompted by dares. River sometimes contrived to pose spookily in the upstairs window facing the house across the street where the youngest kids lived: I have earned my eccentricity.

Many nights, River sat in her easy chair facing her reflection in the black windows and chuckled at the wildlife looking back at her: Here lives an old lady who dresses in bright, clashing colors and talks to ghosts and birds. And talk she did.

“Time for you to bring me presents now,” River would say to Harley Davidson. “You are a crow. You’re supposed to bring me shiny things in return for my gifts to you.”

Harley replied with a head toss, a strut, and a leap into the air to flap away, as if to say, Make me.

“Just stay alive,” River whispered to the impudent crow. “That’s all I want from you really.”

And “I won’t hurt you, silly girl,” River cooed to Queen Liz when the ragged raccoon stood up, forepaws outstretched, if River got too close to the kits. “I’m your guardian servant factotum, my friend. Nothing will happen to you on my watch.”

Liz would deflate as if in response. River would tut-tut at her, “Now you bring me some treats. It’s your turn, lady. A cutting from your roses, say. A casserole. Something.” Liz seemed to pause in her chewing to sneer.

River was tempted to pat Liz’s head. She wasn’t like the other raccoons. She was the oldest, a survivor, and she was the smartest and she knew just how to get what she wanted from humans.

* * *

River hated fall mornings. That was when hunters would wake her up shooting at sunrise. River forgave the weekday hunters, who were probably local and genuinely respected their kills and fed the meat to their family. But most of the gunfire happened on weekend mornings. That meant rich people from over the mountain who pursued recreation by killing the geese and ducks who shared the docks with the otters. Or they might be taking down one of the elk. Or it could be Tulip, her flank-wounded friend, or even old Liz, too blind to see which human was approaching. River even worried about the safety of the mama bear who trashed the neighborhood garbage cans and sometimes the not-so-feral cats.

More and more hunters disturbed River’s sleep, yet it did not seem to diminish the numbers of River’s visitors. More and more refugees showed up at River’s sanctuary.

The latest town council election had replaced several seats. The new council repped for the timber company that owned the land uphill from the town. The company always logged the tops of the hills bald, replanted the land, and sprayed the clearcut with chemicals to discourage undergrowth — but now without opposition. The chemicals killed what small prey were left for the predators who hadn’t already lost habitat during the clearcut, along with fish and birds and snakes and toads and squirrels. Both predators and prey fled downhill into the remaining trees and into the town itself. Hungry mountain lions and coyotes finished off the local pets and worked their way down the menu to the sluggish, half-hibernating raccoons and the young deer and the elk yearlings.

River couldn’t blame the predators for being hungry. They owned this town before it was a human town. Nevertheless, she fortified her sanctuary with motion-sensitive lights to discourage the cats. She put out opened jars of vinegar that the coyotes hated to smell. It worked, at least enough so that River didn’t find so many leftovers of their meals on her walks.

The flashing lights and peculiar smells didn’t exactly ruin River’s reputation as a witch among the local children — or their parents. That was fine with River.

River rarely spoke to other humans as she headed into the downhill part of her 80s. Her long-ago therapist would say she was isolating. Accurate enough, River supposed, but it had been decades since she saw that as something wrong with her that needed fixing.

Besides, she wasn’t truly isolated. She had all the company she wanted and needed. Her companions nowadays did die on her — even sooner than her geezer human friends — but they had boundaries. They respected River’s boundaries. And these friends never told her the same story twice.

These friends were more than enough for River, and they showed River she was still important, a creature of great value. Every time a new flock of goldfinches or a wary raccoon boar or fawn showed up in River’s sanctuary, she felt buoyant and immortal. The weekend hunters with their fresh gear, still creased from the store, would not take that away from her.

When a glossy raven, bigger even than the king-size crows she normally fed, parked its thick torso on the porch railing, River was elated. It did not seem inclined to move. It shifted left and right, from foot to foot, but kept its perch as she approached. It stared at River, croaking approvingly when she refilled the peanut feeder.

“I think I’ll call you Poe,” River said to the raven, which was regarding her tilt-headed, no more than two feet away. “I’m River. A pleasure to meet you, Poe.”

And Poe croaked, “Hello.”

And River opened her mouth to say something, but she couldn’t decide what to say.

Poe rattled, “Good morning.”

“You’re not wrong,” River replied, and then she laughed like she hadn’t since Marty died.

“You are River,” Poe said.

“I am. How are you talking to me? Are you talking to me? Am I finally losing it?”

“You are fine. All ravens can talk, fool. We do not talk to humans. Generally.”

“Why not?”

“Seriously?”

“Stupid question. Right. But why talk to me?”

“You are not stupid. And I think you might be why I am here. Partly.”

“But how?”

“How did I get here, you mean?”

“Yes. I guess so. Yes! How?”

“My daughter, who I taught many things although I was a shitty mom, turned me into a raven. She unlocked a forbidden room, which was inevitable, because she is a master thief and there is nothing so tempting to a thief as a forbidden room, and…”

“You were human?”

“On the other side of the other door to the forbidden room, yes. I was human. I was bad at it, but I was human.”

“So you came through the forbidden room after she turned you into a raven.”

“My transformation was the price she paid for her trespass.”

“I see. I am sad that…”

“Do not be sad, fool. I like being a raven. I think I am going to be much better at being a raven than I was at being a human.”

“Well, then, good I guess. But I’m happy you’re here and help yourself to peanuts anytime and I’m thrilled to be talking to a raven who can talk to me, but still: Why me?”

“It is my task to grant your greatest desire. Just one. Not three wishes, that never works out well for anyone. Just one. And no, do not say anything yet. Do not speak. Go to sleep tonight and dream a dream. Dream that your greatest desire has come true. When you wake up, it will be so.”

“But what if I have a nightmare? What if I can’t sleep or don’t dream?”

“You humans like to make up things to worry about.”

“That is true. OK then. I’m going to leave a breakfast of peanuts in the feeder for you before I go to bed, just in case. No matter what happens, thank you.”

Poe let out a decidedly not-human grumble-squawk, leaped off the railing, and swooped across the driveway into the copse of crabapple trees. River could hear her croaking from farther and farther away. A cold rain had started, but River stayed on the deck and breathed in the sanctuary’s sounds and sights and smells until she was drenched.

Then she went to bed.

* * *

River rolled over in bed, opening one eye enough to notice the sky was light. She rolled over in bed and did not groan. Her back felt strong. Her knees and elbows did not hurt. She could see two spiders in detail above her on the high ceiling. Her heart yelled at her brain to dress and go for a walk right away because she could not hear any rain falling.

River sat up and swung her legs over the side of the bed. She stood up. She stretched. She took a deep breath, then another.

Nothing hurt.

She did not feel like climbing back under the covers for another hour.

Nothing. Hurt.

Wait a minute.

Wait. A. Minute.

River remembered last night.

River, not bothering to pull on her sweats over her boxers and tank top, ran to the mirror in the bathroom.

River’s face was smooth. Her lips were full. Her eyebrows where red, not silver. Her hair was auburn, not silver. Her breasts were the famous globes her lovers had adored touching. Her belly was sleek and touchable. Her neck was tight, not stringy. And River could see. River could see everything clearly without pressing her face close to it. River could smell.

River.

Could.

Smell.

The cat box downstairs, one day overdue for a cleaning. The oranges in the bowl on the kitchen counter. The savor of old floorboards above the furnace.

But what about —

River threw the door open and — Petrichor. Pine. Grass clippings. Wet soil.

Everything. Everything was here.

River was here.

River was young. River didn’t have to think about how much she could hurry up and do before she died. River didn’t have to make plans for how her hungry wild friends would get along after she was gone. She was here. She would be here.

She was young.

River was young.

“Poe!” River shouted.

She looked up. An especially large raven, high above her, drifted in a lazy circle. The big bird barely dipped her wing in acknowledgement.

“Peanuts!” Poe yelled, then croaked and croaked and croaked.

Poe did not stop croaking until River, young River, overfilled the tray with so many peanuts they spilled onto the deck.

Poe stood in the middle of the tray and ate peanut after peanut while crows and jays scolded and River laughed.

“You scoundrel,” River said. “Shame on you. And thank you.” “You fool. Ravens can’t talk,” Poe said, then flew away.


L (just L) Swartz intrepidly chronicles fairy tale apostates, arrogant dragons, and shapeshifting ex-lovers. L shares life on the North Coast of Oregon with 1 nonbinary badass partner of 23 years, 3 crime cats, 1 sweet dog, and 1 loud parrot, while feeding every corvid and raccoon in Tillamook County.


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“Marbles” Flash Fiction by Alan Caldwell

"Marbles" Flash Fiction by Alan Caldwell: photo of multi-colored glass marbles

The father’s breathing sounded like marbles rolling on a hardwood floor. The boy had heard this comparison used to describe the death rattle before. The old people always said this, like people on the news always said that a tornado sounded like a freight train. The boy had heard tornados that sounded like trains and now he heard death that sounded like marbles.

The nurse said this sound rarely lasted for more than a few hours. She saw death almost daily. She was a clean and pretty lady, an expert in human exits. She said this at 5pm. It was now 3am. She also said that this rattle caused no pain, but those who might confirm this never did. It sounded like it hurt.

The mother slept on the couch, soundly, not ten feet from the rattle while the boy moved from seat to seat, the foot of the father’s bed, and kitchen chairs, and even the floor.

The boy thought of the last few days, and then the last few months. He thought of the father’s questions about what sins Jesus might forgive and which ones might preclude pardon. The boy quoted the relevant red passages from memory. The father admired the scriptures and the boy who memorized them. The boy knew them all, but believed only a few. The father liked believing in the boy and the reassurance he gave, and the boy liked giving the reassurance he himself would never receive. It was a small lie, he thought, smaller than those the dying father and sleeping mother told.

Then the boy thought mostly about promises. The father made those he didn’t keep, but the boy always believed he would have kept them if he could, and he always believed he might keep the next one. It was here that he saw his faith disappear like wisps of holocaust smoke, every future lie reflecting an original one.

The boy also thought about his own promise. The father feared suffering more than retribution and made the boy promise that he would end his suffering when the time came. Believing in mercy, the boy had agreed, though he knew others had begged the father for mercy he never gave. The boy sat for two long hours, his back against the kitchen wall. The rattle never changed in tone or volume. Then the boy nodded asleep and dreamed, or remembered, the father putting his pistol to the head of the boy’s dog, his back broken, his hips twisted topsy-turvy by the car’s impact.

The sound of the shot awakened him, and something inside him.

The boy walked to the father’s bed. He placed his palm against the father’s scalp. It was cool to the touch, like the hood of a car left sitting in the shade, its engine having been shut off for hours. Cool, and yet the rattle continued.

The boy unfolded a damp cloth and wiped the father’s face one last time. He lay the cloth over the father’s face, covering his eyes. He clasped the father’s nose between his left thumb and forefinger and pressed his palm over the mouth. The process reminded him of a child forming a snowball from cold white powder.

The boy loved the father and hated that he loved him.

But, most of all, he hated the sound of the marbles, and then there was nothing left to hate.


Alan Caldwell hs been teaching for 29 years, but only began submitting my writings last May. He has been published in almost two dozen journals and magazines since. 


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“Getting a Fire Started” Short Story by Thibault Jacquot-Paratte

"Getting a Fire Started" Fiction by Thibault Jacquot-Paratte. Photo by Benjamin Nelan

The party would have been over, if someone hadn’t brought along marshmallows as a party food, which in turn, brought up the suggestion that when the sun would set, and it would start getting dark, we would build a fire, and roast the marshmallows above the open flame. It was in town, this party to which I had been invited for some reason (as it was not customary for me to be invited to any shindigs, and so, was not in my habit to attend), and most of the attendees were military brats.

And a good deal of them were army air cadets – a sinister organization into which I once had been drawn. Being a metalhead I fit in very little with their spit-and-polish types. The type of people who pretend to be cleaner than their neighbours, and who judge you on sight. Who think that shaving means that you are respectful, and who see disagreeing as a criminal offense (as, in the military, it often tends to be). 

(When I say I had been drawn into it, it was for a rather short period, as when looking at my shaggy black hair they said “above the ear”, and when I had it cut to “above the ear”, it still was not short enough to their liking; they postponed giving me my uniform leaving me singled out, most purposefully – noticeable, that one who doesn’t have a uniform, doesn’t have a buzz cut, and wears metal band Ts – and that day they wanted us to parade around for some officer, behind the Foodland by minus forty, I said “no sir, enough of that!”, and never went back. I had been lured in by the prospects of a free piloting license – because the government is willing to spend money on youths to have a free piloting license if they spend hours every week drilling, but it wouldn’t do the same for youths who spend their time reading, or studying. But a free piloting license wasn’t worth the wasted hours. One of the last times I had gone to cadets, was one time we could finally do some shooting. They handed me an air riffle and a pair of protective glasses, to shoot targets at the end of a range, while lying flat on our fronts. Some pipsqueak leading air cadet half my size was assigned to supervise me (to be a Leading air cadet, one needed no qualifications, one needed only to be with the organization for at least six months). I was laughing. “What’s funny?” he asked. “What the hell is this?” I replied, “I’m from the countryside, I’ve been shooting with live ammunition since I’ve been ten. What’s the deal with these glasses when we’re gonna shoot pellets at the end of a range?”. “They can bounce back and hurt you” he said. “How do you suppose it could bounce back from the end of that range?” I insisted. Smart mouth, the L.A.C. said “Either you comply or you don’t shoot”. Fun stuff – so I was lying down with my glasses becoming foggy from my body heat, and I was trying to aim properly. After a first shot that hit somewhere along the blue line, I took off my glasses to wipe them. “Put those back on! You need to have your glasses on at all times when on the range!” he yelled. “I’m just wiping them clean – they’re foggy; I can’t see shit!” I said, showing him the goggles. “Okay, but do it fast” he whispered. As soon as I had put them back on, it started all over again – it was damn hot, how they were heating that building in mid-November! Another half-miss. I had enough of that – I reloaded, stood up, took off my glasses, and shot. Dead center! That’s how hillbillies do it! I went back and turned in the “weapon”. That was it for me and the “air cadets”). 

And here was I, outside a house in the town suburbs, with a bunch of those fanatics, and we were going to start a fire. They – the owners of the house – had a fire pit all ready, arranged, prepared. “Perfect!” I though, until the cadets went in, to try to apply what they had learned in “survival training”. 

During the first ten-or-so minutes, they argued about how to set up the wood. “We have to put all the branches in one direction, so the wind gets through! The flame needs air!” said the first. “No! We have to Cross them in different directions, so that it leaves room in between! Air pockets!” Said the second. “No, the branches should be standing, I mean, they should be like a cone, like a teepee. That way there’s room underneath, and the flames are high” said the third. Impressed by this elaborate design, they got to work. Standing there, I remarked “It all depends on the weather you have, but none of it really matters as long as you get it started right”. “Shut up” they said “we got this. We passed our survival training. This is easy”. 

And so, I sat at the table where the ladies were steering clear from the macho quarrels, or admiring them. Another excluded male, whose name was Gabriel, honestly stated “My grandad always got his fires started with a gasoline mix. That’s how he showed me. Said it helped, like with barbecue fluid. So don’t ask me nothin’ about building a fire other ways!”. Clean, unassuming, honest. He stayed seated and chatted with the ladies. 

It was a hilarious scene where the distinctions between the expected typical males and the expected typical females were put into stark contrast. These scenes, we’ve all had them. I recall a story from my school music teacher with whom I got along, because neither he nor I fit into an “expected typical” category. Once after class once, he reminisced about a soiree he had been at, while explaining to me how Schoenberg’s 12 tone method worked. “All the men were in the living room, talking about cars, hockey, and boobs, so I went into the kitchen where the women were, who were talking about gossip, tv. series and books, which in comparison was vastly more interesting, but they shooed me out because they didn’t want any guys there, so I had to stay and be bored, listening about cars, hockey and boobs”. 

In the backyard, where I was, the girls, who were all of military upbringing, were fundamentally different. Maybe because of the branches in the military. With only one of them, Sophie, was I acquainted – we had been in after-school clubs, and I suspected it was through her that I had been invited. Her family was military, but worked in Search and Rescue – so, not cannon fodder. Actually, I had a huge crush on her, and not only because she was one of the rare girls who talked to me. I wouldn’t have asked her out because I valued her friendship too much, and I feared the same thing would happen as with this other girl called Jenny. She and her best friend Marie had started hanging out with me and my friend Peter, who was nicknamed Peter built because we both expected to become truckers, and he was so large that he had something of a peterbilt. They had hung out with us some, and we had enjoyed their company, until Peter, who had more guts and more self confidence than I, asked Marie if she would like to go on a date with him, maybe even, if Jenny wanted to, a double date, the four of us. She politely declined, and they ignored us for the rest of the school year. 

And so I valued Sophie’s friendship too much to ask her out, which is ridiculous since she stopped talking to me anyways. She stopped talking to me largely due to another girl who was there – named Daphne – who was as superficial as they can come, all the opposite of Sophie. As that evening was one of the only pleasant encounters I had with Daphne, I would have never suspected her – the low-witted make-up covered gossip queen – to become friends with the socially engaged and very literate Sophie. Nonetheless, the worst is often to happen. I’d never know why Sophie preferred Daphne’s company. Maybe they went to some same church or something – I wouldn’t know about any of that.

Two girls remained, and they were Angel – a tall black girl, who was an air cadet, yet instead of the air of superiority most of them hailed, was a shy and polite girl, who liked to take pictures, and who envisioned becoming air reconnaissance photographer (or something along those lines) –, and Jane, a short baptist who was very nice as long as no one mentioned any religious subject (I learned that surprisingly enough, she would later convert to Catholicism and become a nun). We sat there, and joked for a while, about trying out Gabriel’s technique, about driving a car around for a few blocks and roasting the marshmallows under the hood, or about going to the beach to roast the marshmallows, as it would take less time than waiting for  the dudebros to succeed in building a lasting fire. 

The three dudebros huddled around the fire pit had abandoned the idea of arranging the sticks like a cone. In fact, they had found other ways to rearrange the wood, so that it would supposedly burn better. They had debated matches; safety matches (or Swedish matches as they’re sometimes called), vs. other matches, or a lighter.

“Does anyone have a lighter?” asked the main alphaalpha – the kind of guy who you knew would peak around our age  – “I forgot mine. I didn’t think I would need it”. 

“I can just get the fire started,” said I.

“No, screw you, we’re doing it,” he affirmed. 

“Okay,” I backed down, relaxed, largely also because I thought it was funny to watch them try, and put so much effort into it. 

“Just let him do it,” sighed Sophie.

“No, Sophie, we’re gonna have it lit soon,” said the second one. 

So we sat pretty while they used up a pack of matches, and we talked about projects, about activities, about cooking, about food, about the fact we were hungry, about night that was getting dark, about mosquitoes… And the dudebros talked about how they could place the sticks they had gathered as firewood, and I was asking them if I could do it, and they gave me the same response “No, screw you, we know how to do it”, and I tried to give them tips “Place some of those dry leaves at the bottom, get some more fire starting material”, and they would tell me to shut up, and Gabriel would make jokes about getting some gasoline, and I would say that build small fires it all the time on the north mountain, and they would ignore me. Daphne wanted to go in to sing some Karaoke, and Sophie wanted to go to the beach; Angel and Jane wanted to go home, but they didn’t have a ride. “I can give you a ride” I told them. “How do you know where I live?” asked Angel not shocked, but amused. “Don’t you remember? You saw me coming out of Nanette’s place – she’s my band’s drummer, that’s where we practice”. “Right!” she said, before Daphne asked “You’re in a band?”. “Yes” I answered. “Oh”. 

And as we were about to leave I asked for the last time “You sure you don’t want I should do it?”, about the fire, to which the dudebro who had non-verbally established himself as the leader of the pack, burst out “Fine, you think you can do it, go ahead!”, and the third one warned me “It’s these matches, the problem”, though they were using up a second pack, as the first one had been used up. 


Not changing how they had placed their wood, I stuffed dry leaves wherever I could – as dry leaves were all over the ground, no more fire-starter needed to be found ; I lit a match and put it to the middle of the base I had established. Within a minute a fire was roaring, and I handed them their matches, of which one single I had used. Frustrated but glad to have a fire, and for the party to have come back to life, the others gathered around the flames, sticking the marshmallows on sharpened sticks. One of the guys only muttered to me “You redneck bastard”, to which I didn’t care. Having a sun-burnt neck means that you work hard under a harsh beating sun. You work hard, you also know your stuff. And you need neither to show off, to be called leading cadet, or to wear a uniform. All I had needed was time in the country to try things out for myself, and if I didn’t manage myself, to ask from people who knew. If the government wanted to invest into these military brats, who went from town to city to town, and give them free piloting licenses in exchange for standing straight in lines, and getting haircuts, then my behind would stay in the country without any of their privileges. At least I knew how to build a fire.


Born in Nova Scotia, Canada, in 1993, Thibault Jacquot-Paratte writes in both English and French. Recently he has served as literary editor to the anthology Il y a des bombes qui tombent sur Kyiv. His novel A dream is a notion of and his short work collection Souvenirs et Fragments were published in May 2022. Previous publications include his poetry collection Cries of somewhere’s soil, and three of his plays. More of his work has been featured in reviews and anthologies. He enjoys spending time with his wife and their daughter, and finding new creative projects. He is a regular contributing journalist to Le Courrier de la Nouvelle-Écosse, his play Il y avait des murmures sous le sol will premier in February 2023. He is currently employed as Script writer at Bored Panda Studios.


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“Game of Dares” Micro-Horror by Debasish Mishra

"Game of Dares" Fiction by Debasish Mishra; photo of Banyan tree by Brett L. of San Francisco, USA
“Banyan Tree at Night” (2010) Photo by Brett L. of San Francisco, CA, USA shared under the Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Share-Alike Generic License

When the noisy clock sounded nine times, the open bar was drained to a trickle. This roadside bar in the middle of the woods was the last thing I expected in my long ride. There must be a hamlet nearby, I thought, and parked my car beneath the giant banyan.

Just two of us—a stranger and me—dipped our sadness in our brimming glasses. He finally broke the silence between us: Would you play a game, gentleman? I didn’t offer a second glance. 

and pretended to put my head in the glass. Game of dares? It’d be fun! His voice as loud as the clock, as close to me as my shadow. Then the touch of his arm in my shoulder. 

I’m in no mood to play, I shrugged.

Your face reveals you’re also broke. Why not lessen the load a bit? Let’s make it a deal of interest. The one who fails will pay the bills.

My reluctance yielded to his relentless pestering.

He then took out an empty bottle and gave it an angry spin. It danced on the table for a minute or so and finally died, pointing its head toward him.

Ask me anything and I agree to oblige, he said.

I had no idea in my head. I wished him to go away. But I didn’t dare to flare his fury!

Walk on the bonfire if you can, I said instead, pointing my finger to the outside.

He followed my instructions like a zombie and gingerly walked over the fire as though it was a carpet of roses. No frown, no fear, no agony—he was completely insane!

My shock had no time to culminate. 

Let’s start it again, he said.

The bottle poked its finger to my face and he jumped from his seat: half in excitement, half in madness. It’s my turn now to test your prowess.

He took out a knife from his pocket like a nice little secret and kept it on the table.

Stab me, he said. 

What the fuck? I am not playing anymore.

You can’t quit. Rules are rules.

I was trying to escape in haste but he held my hand in his grip. The smile turned to ferocity. Rules have to be obeyed.

You never said, one can’t quit, I bawled with indignation.

I may have forgot. But rules are rules.

I yelled for help but the bar owner and the lone waiter were nowhere.

I nervously picked the knife, closed my eyes, and tried to thrust it into his belly. The knife went through him and pierced the leather as if he was a shadow. His body was only air.

His smile reappeared with ghostly intensity. You can’t kill a dead man, can you?


Debasish Mishra is a Senior Research Fellow at NISER, India. He is the recipient of the 2019 Bharat Award for Literature and the 2017 Reuel International Best Upcoming Poet Prize. His recent work has appeared in 𝑁𝑜𝑟𝑡ℎ 𝐷𝑎𝑘𝑜𝑡𝑎 𝑄𝑢𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑙𝑦, 𝑃𝑒𝑛𝑢𝑚𝑏𝑟𝑎, 𝑇ℎ𝑒 𝐻𝑒𝑎𝑑𝑙𝑖𝑔ℎ𝑡 𝑅𝑒𝑣𝑖𝑒𝑤, 𝐴𝑚𝑠𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑑𝑎𝑚 𝑄𝑢𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑙𝑦, 𝐶𝑎𝑙𝑖𝑓𝑜𝑟𝑛𝑖𝑎 𝑄𝑢𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑙𝑦, and elsewhere.


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