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“Beyond the Briar” Dystopian Fantasy Short Story by Marco Etheridge

"Beyond the Briar" Dystopian Fantasy Fiction by Marco Etheridge

In the almost forgotten times that wrought the after-years, the world and its weather changed, bringing storm and famine, war and famine, drought and famine. Nations were riven and destroyed. Petty warlords fought for smaller and smaller fiefs until farm and town were made desolate and the people fled. The scattered survivors were oppressed by hunger and hardship, fire and want. The after-years created devastation and loosed upon the land the wanderers, the hunters, and the displaced soldiers of fortune.

So it chanced that one such soldier trudged the dog end of a long road at the gloaming of a day in spring. Behind him, the sun slipped to the rocky hills he had just descended. The dying rays illuminated skeletons of burned-out trees that lined the empty path. His elongated shadow stretched far ahead on the broken, grass-choked pavement.

The lone man strode after his shadow with a loose gait. He stood tall, lean, and wolfish. He was not young. Four decades he bore, and his face was lined. A heavy rucksack and quiver hung from his shoulders, and he carried in his hand a longbow of yew.

His self-given name was Adam, from a book his aunt read to him as a child. Adam Damned, if any dared to ask his surname. Few did. Adam Damned was an archer, a marketable trade now that guns and the bullets that fed them had vanished into obscurity. His loyalties were for sale to any prince who could pay his wages and fill his belly.

The cracked roadway ran down to an open valley and the ruins of a town. It was once a thriving place astraddle the meeting of two highways. Now, the roads were empty ribbons, and the town inhabited by ghosts. A few scroungers lived amongst the ruins, trading worthless junk and bartering for a mean existence.

The name of the town was Consequences.

Adam Damned reached the edge of the town as night fell over it. Empty doors and windows gaped dark and blind from either side of the road. There were no human sounds, only the rustling and creeping of nocturnal creatures. He did not stop to hunt, for he already carried fresh meat to barter. A feeble light glimmered at the distant end of the street and a wheezing sort of music reached his ears.

Adam walked on. The light became a glow, and the stumbling pulse of the music grew louder. He stepped from the darkness into the circle of light. The music ceased as if cut from the air with a knife.

A woman sat upon the steps of a red brick hotel. Paired candle lanterns hung from the hotel doorway, dropping a flickering light over the seated woman.

She might have been forty or sixty. Impossible to tell in that light. Her bare arms were lean as twisted rope, and she held a battered concertina in her lap. The woman cocked her head and smiled. Her teeth were strong and white. Her hair was silvered, but by age or candlelight, Adam could not tell.

His hunter’s eyes searched the light and the blackness beyond, but no one did he see. He turned his eyes back to the woman.

“I wish you a good evening.”

She chuckled at his words.

“A fine wish, but empty of promise. Still, I thank you. Welcome to Consequences.”

Adam felt the weight of his rucksack and the hunger in his belly. He pointed to the sign illuminated by the candle lanterns.

“Is there room at the inn?”

The woman laughed and swept a hand through the air.

“This whole damn town is vacant, stranger. Empty rooms for the taking.”

“I’ve walked far. I prefer somewhere with a hot stove and a warm pallet.”

The woman rubbed her chin and held her hand out, palm up.

“You’ve goods to barter, then?”

“I have. Two fat snakes, fresh today, and a flask of grappa.”

She stood herself straight and tall. The concertina unfolded with a groan.

“Step inside, stranger. Let’s see to your belly and bed.”

*  *  * 

The plates were polished clean and the table bare before Adam dug the flask from his rucksack. The woman who called herself Maude sat across the table, younger now in the soft light of tallow candles. A third figure sat on a stool beside the table, an idiot boy of twenty years or so. If he had a name, no one knew it. Maude called him Boy.

“Will the boy drink?”

“He will. A small one won’t hurt him.”

Adam nodded, uncorked the flask, and poured. Two full drams for himself and Maude, a short pour for the boy. Maude reached for her drink and raised it. The boy aped her, a lopsided grin on his face. Then Adam raised his own glass. They nodded, drank, and grimaced against the fiery liquor.

“Whew! That will liven a girl.”

“Another then?”

Maude nodded and Adam poured. He stoppered the flask and set it aside. He pushed his empty plate aside and leaned his elbows on the table.

“I thank you for the meal, Maude.”

The woman bowed her head in a mockery of courtesy.

“You did not lie, traveler. Those were fine, fat snakes. The deal is square. You’re a guest under my roof, at least for this night.”

“Then I must think of the morrow. What chance of employment in these parts?”

“None in this shithole of a town. You came out of the West. You saw how empty the land is. Two days’ walk to the North lies the territory of a warlord. Payton is his name. The same distance south will bring you to another band of thugs led by a man named Jackson. One as bad as the other, and both looking for men.”

“And this town stuck between the two?”

“They leave us alone. Everything there is to take has been taken. Consequences has no more to give.”

“Us? There are others?”

“Of course, there are others. They’re shy of fighters. You with your longbow, I expect you scared them off. You’ll see them tomorrow.”

The boy erupted in gurgling chuckles.

“What lies to the East?”

“A road you do not want to tread. It leads to an evil place ringed by a tangled hedge of briar. Thorns like claws and sharp as daggers. The hedge guards the past and kills every fool who tries to pierce it.”

Adam drank off half his grappa and winced.

“Another of the old tales. I have heard something like this before. Tell me the rest to pass the rest of the evening.”

Maude shook her head, and her smile disappeared from her face.

“Very well but mind your scorn. Old is not the same as false.”

Then she began to tell the tale.

*  *  *

 It happened when my grandmother was just a small girl, before the great storms and fires. A band of strangers came to this town. It wasn’t called Consequences back then. The strangers seemed to be rich. They bought up the lands east of town and started building. They named their new settlement Paradise. Some of the townsfolk called it a cult, but they said it quiet. The newcomers spent hard cash for goods. Cult or not, folks were glad for the trade.

A young married couple led the pilgrims at Paradise, their king and queen in a way. By all accounts, they were beautiful and wise. The commune prospered under their rule. Homes were built, crops planted, and babies conceived. But not for the queen. She remained childless despite her hopes, the king’s desire, and the chanted dreams of all those in Paradise.

One still summer afternoon, the queen fell asleep on the banks of the stream that watered Paradise. A frog came to her in a dream and told her that her wish would come true. The talking frog promised that within the year, the queen would have a child.

The dream became reality. The queen gave birth to a beautiful baby girl. When their daughter was one year old, the king planned a great feast and festival to celebrate. There would be food and music and special rituals that brought visions of the future.

The feast ran long into the summer twilight. Special wines were passed amongst the elders of Paradise, and small trays of peyote buttons, bitter to the tongue. While the others sang and danced, the wise ones ate the peyote, drank the wine, and waited.

The moon rose in the night sky and the first elder with it. The music ceased and the dancers stilled. All listened as the wise ones bestowed their visions. One by one they stood, offering their gifts to the girl child of the king and queen. One spoke of beauty, another of riches to come, yet another of the virtues the child would inherit.

But all was not well. One of the wise ones fell upon his back, writhing and moaning. When the others tried to assist him, he leaped to his feet, eyes wide and staring. He cried out the words of his vision, and they were dire.

‘When the girl reaches fifteen years, she will feel the sting of life, and life will leave her and all those who dwell with her.’

Then the man fell on his face as if dead. Frightened hands carried his rigid body from the commons.

Under the canopy of the summer stars, the people stared in shocked silence. The king sprang to his feet in anger. The queen’s face blanched deathly pale. But one elder remained who had not yet spoken. She smiled at those assembled and spread her hands wide.

‘I cannot unsay this awful vision, but I can soften it, perhaps. Death shall not be the fate of this beautiful princess, but rather sleep, the sleep of a century. A brave kiss shall awaken her if such kiss can find its way to her sleeping lips.’  

The years passed and the little princess grew into a lively, curious child. Her father did everything he could to protect his daughter from the sting of life. Sharp objects were removed from the household. The princess never heard any news of sadness or loss, for these things were banished.

All the good visions came to pass. The princess was a beautiful, virtuous, good-natured girl, so full of joy that all who knew her loved her.

Her fifteenth birthday drew near. Paradise had grown with the princess. The little commune was now a thriving community, and all the inhabitants busied themselves with preparations for the birthday of the princess.

At last, the special day arrived. The king and queen were busy with preparations for the birthday party. The princess was left alone to do as she pleased. She roamed around the compound, stopping to pet the sheep, or speak with the burly blacksmith.

Back in the very farthest corner of the compound, she came to a building she did not know. She slipped past double doors and stepped into a large workroom.

It was a magical place the likes of which the girl had never seen. A dozen young women sat at wheels and spindles, spinning flax into yarn. On the other side of the room, men and women worked at looms, weaving the flax yarn into linen cloth.

The princess was enchanted with the clatter and clack of the looms, and the delightful rattle of the wheel and spindle. She wished to learn everything about this magical process.

The women were delighted by the chance to teach the princess to spin flax. They sat the princess on a stool, but when the girl reached for the spindle, she pricked her finger and felt the sting.

 In that moment, the princess fell into a swoon. The weavers carried the girl back to her chambers. Their steps were slow, for they felt a great weariness slipping over them.

They laid the girl on her maiden bower and pulled the coverlet to her chin. Then the grieving weavers and spinners went in search of the king and queen, but they never found the girl’s parents.

Before they could impart their dire news, weariness captured them. Their eyelids drooped and close. A deep sleep fell over the compound and all that dwelt there. The king and queen slept, as did every inhabitant of Paradise. The blacksmith at his forge and the shepherdess by her flock, each fell fast asleep. The horses slept in their stables, the sheep in their pens, the dogs in the yard, and the birds on the branches. All was silent. Not a leaf stirred.

As Paradise slept away the seasons, a thorny hedge of briar grew up all around the compound, surrounding it with a tangled wall. With each passing year, the hedge grew higher and the thorns longer, until it was a grasping, deadly peril, thrice the height of the tallest man.

The tale went far and wide of a beautiful princess trapped in a thorny prison. There were riches and glory for any brave lad who freed the poor girl from her enchantment. The spell could only be broken when a lone warrior breached the evil hedge and awakened the princess with a brave kiss.

And so it was that the brave sons of rich men and paupers, and not a few daughters as well, came to test their strength and skill against the thorny hedge that imprisoned the princess.

Many tried, and many failed. They were young and brave, but they were foolish. They hewed their way into the hedge and were swallowed by it. The hooked thorns of the hedge were sharp as an eagle’s talon, strong as the claws of a great bear.

The doomed young men and women were pinioned by the grasping vines, which moved as living serpents. Deadly thorns tore their young flesh. The malignant briar hedge captured each one of the brave fools, bound them with tendrils and vines, pierced their flesh with thorns, and bled the life from them. They died a miserable death.

*  *  * 

Her tale told, Maude leaned back in her chair. The candles guttered in an unseen draught, and shadows wavered across the table.

Adam raised his glass and tossed off the last of the grappa. The empty glass rapped loud against the wooden table.

“Another wild tale about the sorrow of young fools. Bravery and foolishness are bound together. I’ve seen many dead fools after a battle, each of them stiff as boards and cloaked in their bravery.”

Maude leaned forward and stared into his eyes.

“You do not believe the tale?”

“My belief has nothing to do with it. It may be true. Perhaps one day I will go and see this damned briar hedge with my own eyes.”

“I would argue against you.”

Adam Damned smiled at this silver-haired woman.

“Would you indeed, Maude? Well, there is no need. Tomorrow I will go to the North. It is work I need, not foolish errands.”

He reached a strong hand to his rucksack and hoisted himself from his chair.

“Has my barter bought me breakfast?”

“It has. I will show you to your pallet.”

She rose and led him from the darkening kitchen. The man and woman retired, each to their own bed, leaving the idiot boy to sleep beside the dying warmth of the stove.

Adam Damned awakened to the crack of an ax and the thump of wood against earth. He threw off the quilts, stepped to the window, and peered into the dawn. In the yard below, the idiot boy was splitting kindling for the morning fire. The blade of his ax flashed in the rays of the rising sun.

Hunger gnawed at his belly, as it did every morning he had ever known. He splashed his face in a basin of cold water, dressed himself, and descended to the kitchen.

Maude knelt before the old iron stove, stoking a fire. She wished him a good morning without turning, intent on her task. Adam seated himself at the table and waited. Boy clumped into the kitchen with an armload of split firewood.

Breakfast was pungent sage tea and a bowl of porridge. As he took the first spoonful into his mouth, a warm sweetness danced over Adam’s tongue. Surprise raised his eyebrows and Maude caught the look.

“Agave honey. Boy gathers it. He’s a wonder with the bees. They’ll chase me half a mile, but he’s never stung.”

Boy grinned at Maude and shoveled mush into his mouth.

When he departed, Adam left all the food he could spare. He called it an advance on future lodging. Maude accepted the barter without comment. With the rucksack lighter on his shoulders, Adam marched away to the North, intent on selling his bow to the warlord named Payton.

*  *  *

Six weeks the bowman served Payton, fighting the marauding bands that dared to challenge the warlord’s territory. He fought well and earned his wages. When the fighting came to an end, Adam Damned took his leave, though his bloody employer entreated the bowman to stay.

Adam left the warlord’s service a richer man, with a promise of future wages in his ear, and booty slung upon the back of a mule. He led the stubborn animal south, a two-day march, until he reached Consequences. He slipped past the town by moonlight of the second night and made his camp to the south.

The warlord Jackson hired Adam on sight, just as Payton had. One long look at the bowman served to establish his credentials. Adam killed in Jackson’s service every day for a long month, his arrows felling all who dared to stand against him.

Adam gathered his blood wages and departed for the North. The mule bore a heavy load, packs lashed and bound with newly plaited chord. Coils of horsehair rope hung from the packs. The mule strained and balked under the weight of blood wages. Adam kept a tight grip on the animal’s lead rope.

Two days later, as night fell over the town, Adam Damned walked back into the ruined town. He paced up the empty street. The weary mule plodded behind, balking now and then in a half-hearted way.

Ahead, Adam saw the flickering candle lanterns hanging from the hotel doorway. Maude sat on the stairs, torturing her wheezing concertina. Boy sat beside her. The mule snorted and Maude looked toward the sound. He saw a smile crease her face. Boy pointed, gurgling his unintelligible talk.

He stepped into the circle of light. Maude squeezed the last jangled chords from the concertina and dropped her hands to her lap. Silence settled over the street. Then the mule snorted, and Boy resumed his quiet gibbering.

“I see you’re still living.”

“That I am, Maude.”

“And you’ve come back.”

Adam nodded and smiled at her banter.

“I have.”

She set the concertina aside and stood up.

“You’ll be wanting to eat, I suppose. Have you anything to barter, then?”

Adam laughed out loud, and the sound of his laughter filled the street. He pointed to the laden mule.

“I find myself in a good position to barter.”

Maude gave Boy a dig with the toes of her bare foot.

“See to the mule, Boy, and bring the packs into the kitchen. I believe we’re going to feast tonight.”

Boy leaped to his feet and scampered across the pool of light. He stopped in front of Adam and held out his hand. Adam handed Boy the lead rope, and the idiot chortled as he led the mule into the darkness.

Maude waved to the door and Adam stepped forward. He climbed the stairs to stand beside her, looking down into her grey eyes. She gave him a smile and a nod, then pushed the door open with her foot. Her hand snaked around to the small of his back and she gave him a shove.

“Get on with you, then.”

He stepped through the door. Maude snuffed the candle lanterns and followed. The heavy door closed behind her, shutting out the night.

The feast ran long around the kitchen table, and the drink longer. Maude and Adam sat in the over-warm kitchen, flushed and sweating from the rare indulgence of enough food and too much wine. Boy snored from his pallet beside the stove. Soiled dishes and crusted pans soaked in the wash barrel.

Maude swirled the dregs of her wine and raised the glass to Adam. Glass chimed glass in the quiet room. They tilted their heads and drank away the last.

Two empty wine glasses stood sentinel over the table. Maude laced her fingers through Adam’s, or perhaps Adam’s hand clasped Maude’s. Later, they would not remember. They took each other up the stairs to Maude’s bed, where Adam discovered that silver-haired or no, Maude was younger still than he’d imagined.

*  *  *

Adam did not depart the next morning or yet the next. As the days passed, he and Maude and Boy feasted on the perishable food before it spoiled. They hoarded the rest of the booty against future hunger.

Life in Consequences was lean but peaceful. The few wanderers who stopped at the hotel minded their manners. Maude’s stern grey eyes and Adam’s long shadow kept the peace. The furtive inhabitants grew accustomed to Adam, grateful for his longbow.

Adam and Boy roamed the valley and hills. The bowman hunted quail and hare, bringing them down with blunted arrows. Boy gathered honey and collected eggs from hidden nests.

In the evenings, they gathered under the candlelight. A few of the townsfolk grew brave enough to join the circle. Maude tortured her concertina while they clapped and laughed at the noise.

Through the long summer nights, Maude and Adam shared a bed and each other. As the season turned, and the nights grew longer, so too did Adam and Maude grow into something larger than the sum of woman and man alone.

This new existence stood outside anything Adam had ever known. There was love in his life. A strong woman cared for him, and he for her. No one was trying to kill him, and his bow was not for sale. The townsfolk treated him with respect instead of fear.

And yet for all of that, a restlessness nipped at his heels. Adam tried to ignore his nagging thoughts, but they would not be denied. Whispers tempted his ears as he prowled the hills.

You came from the West. You fought in the North and the South. What of the East? Have you forgotten the tale? Are you afraid?

Adam answered the call while pretending not to hear. He hunted further and further to the East, forbidding Boy to follow. Boy whimpered and cried, but Adam ignored him. Maude noted the change between the idiot boy and her hunter. She sensed Adam’s discontent, as one senses a storm building over the edge of the far hills.

When at last he spoke his declaration, his words held no surprise for Maude.

“I will go and see the briar hedge with my own eyes, to know if it is true or no. I am not afraid.”

Sitting across the table, Maude raised her eyes to his, careful with her words.

“And who here ever named you afraid?”

“No one, truly, but this thing gnaws at me. I must go or call myself a coward.”

Maude smashed her fist down and the dishes jumped. Boy whimpered and fled to his sanctuary beside the stove.

“I’d call you a fool, but the words would be wasted. I’m the fool for letting my mouth run away from me. If I’d never told you that stupid tale, you’d have no need of this folly.”

Maude did all she could to dissuade him, both in word and deed. Adam hesitated, his mind torn in a way he had never known. But his hesitation did not last.

Adam hunted still further into the East, for the game seemed more plentiful in that direction. One afternoon, he stood upon the crest of a small knoll. Behind him, the autumn sun slipped toward the horizon. The slanting light etched the land in sharp relief. And in that light, Adam caught his first glimpse of the briar hedge.

A green barrier stretched across the open land before the valley rose to the eastern hills beyond. From a distance, it took on the appearance of a wall fashioned by men, uniform in height. The green wall ran from north to south, then curved back upon itself to form a ring. From his vantage atop the knoll, Adam could not see the far side of the ring, but he did not doubt. This was the briar hedge told of in the legend, and the remains of Paradise lay within.

Adam turned away from the hunt and hurried toward the setting sun. As he walked, he plotted his return, laying plans for his assault on the wall of briar.

Adam Damned left Consequences at sunrise of the following day. He promised to return, but Maude did not hold with empty vows. She watched him go, her eyes dry and flashing with anger. Beside her, Boy blubbered and cried. When he and the mule vanished from sight, Maude turned away. She shoved the sobbing idiot to his chores and set herself to her own.

*  *  *

Adam marched the long day and the mule followed behind, glad for its lighter load. Coils of rope hung from its back, and Boy’s sharp ax lashed above. Man and mule reached the briar hedge as evening fell over the land. Adam made camp in a small grove within sight of the thorny wall.

The sun rose, and Adam set to work. He turned the hobbled mule out to graze and took up the ax. First, he felled two young, straight pines. He limbed the fallen trunks, shearing the trunks down to two stout poles, then lopping the tops. Each pole was thick as a man’s arm and longer than the height of the briar hedge.

Selecting such limbs as were straight and stout, Adam chopped them into rungs. Turning back to the poles, he cut shallow notches at intervals, laying a rung across the paired notches as he worked his way up the poles. The morning was running on to noon when he laid aside the ax.

Using lengths of the plaited rope, Adam lashed the rungs to the poles. With the ladder completed, he turned his attention to the menace of the briar hedge.

The green wall towered above him, adorned in glossy green leaves and armed with cruel thorns, long and sharp as curved daggers. As Adam paced along the thorny hedge, he discovered grim evidence of the legend’s truth.

Grey-white bones gleamed from within the tangled vines, full skeletons standing upright, frozen in a grotesque pantomime of hacking and chopping. Not a scrap of flesh remained. The sharp beaks of birds, wind and weather, and the passage of many years had stripped the bones clean. Hard thorns pierced fleshless ribcages and green tendrils grew through empty, gaping eye sockets.

Adam left the foolish dead to their green tomb and turned back to his work. He caught the mule and harnessed it to one end of the ladder. The stubborn animal shied at the awkward load, but Adam coaxed it to the very edge of the briar hedge. Hobbling the mule once more, he set about raising his ladder.

He lifted the near end of the ladder waist high, crouched, and raised himself to his full height. Bracing the ladder with a forked branch, he stepped from beneath it and shook out his limbs. Another forked branch pushed the ladder higher. Adam pushed and braced until the ladder teetered above the height of the hedge. He laid all his weight and strength into the last push, and the ladder toppled forward onto the hedge.

The moment the timber ladder touched the crown of the briar, a violent shudder passed through the green wall. Leaves quivered and thorns rattled as if swept by a sudden storm. Tendrils sprang from the briar hedge. Fast as serpents, thorny vines grew into groping fingers, snaring and binding the poles of the ladder.

Adam stood at the base of the ladder and waited. The briar hedge immobilized the invading ladder, anchoring it more securely than one man could have hoped to. Sensing no more danger, the briar hedge went still, malevolent in its silent brooding.

Nothing moved. Adam waited. There was no sound except the mule’s teeth cropping rough grass. Turning away from the hedge, he walked to his camp.

Adam returned to the ladder prepared for his assault on the briar hedge. In his right hand, he carried the ax. A coil of knotted rope was draped over his shoulder and across his chest. He stood at the base of the ladder, looked up, and began to climb.

He scaled the rungs swift as a hunting cat, his feet leaping from rung to rung. His left hand reached for the next rung while he held the ax ready in his right.

The briar hedge reacted with another angry shudder, but Adam had already gained the last rung. While angry tendrils groped in vain, he made the rope fast to the top of the ladder. He threw the knotted rope and it uncoiled to the ground inside the hedge.

With grasping vines reaching for his boots, Adam tucked the ax into his belt and leaped.

In the next heartbeat, he dangled from the swaying rope. The ladder remained locked tight in the briar’s wooden grip, a strong anchor for rope and man. Adam slid down the knotted line, just out of reach of the briar hedge and its thorny arms. Then he felt the hard ground beneath his boot soles. The hedge was breached. He stepped away from the hedge, pulling the ax free from his belt.

A wide flagstone path led to a patchwork wall made up of the backs of low buildings. A timbered archway guarded a wide opening in the wall. Strange symbols hung from hewn timber above Adam’s head, but there was no gate to bar the way. He did not pause to study the symbols.

Beyond the archway lay a wide common area and a deathly quiet.  Adam stepped forward, his eyes alert and the ax ready at hand. He expected to find ruins, tumbled walls and piles of moldering bones. What he found instead was unlike anything he had ever known.

The first inhabitant he saw was the blacksmith. The big man stood at his forge, hands on the bellows. Adam froze where he was. He waited, but the big man did not move. Scooping a pebble from the ground, Adam tossed the stone onto the overhanging roof above the blacksmith’s head. The rattle and clatter sounded like an avalanche in the stillness. The blacksmith remained still as a statue.

Adam walked into the smithy and stood beside the man. Discarding the patience of the hunter, he poked the man’s thick arm. The flesh felt cool and waxen under his fingertip. Not living skin, and yet not rotting like a corpse. Not alive and not dead.

Shaking his head in wonder, Adam stepped out of the smithy.

As he circled the edge of the commons, Adam felt the pall of sleep that blanketed this place. No birds sang. No dogs barked. He passed a pen of statue sheep, their shepherdess asleep and leaning on her crook. The sleeping corpses were everywhere. They leaned out of windows or sat on stools outside workshops.

Adam moved on. He came to the large building on the far side of the commons, a place that looked like an assembly hall or a church. Inside the shadowed room, a man and woman sat upon a dais, hand in hand, their two carved chairs side by side. Many other statue bodies were scattered around the hall, some seated on cushions, some standing, but all facing the pair on the raised platform.

Leaving the somnambulists, Adam crossed the hall. A double doorway pierced the wall to the right of the platform, and the doors were flung wide. Adam entered, moving into deeper shadows.

Parting a hanging curtain, he stepped into what was obviously a bedchamber. A narrow window allowed a shaft of sunlight to pierce the room. Dust motes hung suspended in the light. In the center of the chamber stood a narrow bed, and on that bed lay a beautiful young woman covered to the throat and bedecked with unwithered flowers.

Even with all he had seen this day, Adam struggled to believe what he saw before his eyes. The princess of legend, the girl of Paradise. Was it all true then?

Adam Damned strode to the bower and leaned over the princess. She was very fair, and yet pale as parchment. No color touched her skin, and no smile creased her lips. Dead and not dead, a perilous beauty waiting for what? The kiss of her prince? He was no king’s son and yet he felt the pull of her cold lips. He stooped, bending his face to hers. One kiss would set this all to rights.

That thought stopped him dead. He stared at those pale eyelids only inches from his own, his warm mouth hovering over her cold lips. He pushed himself upright and took a step back.

There would be no paradise here, no legend sprung to life. The whole thing was a cruel prank, and these sleeping zombies were the butt of the joke. Wake them with a kiss? Wake them to what? They fell asleep thinking they had built their heaven. Would you wake them to face a miserable hell, the cracked and broken world outside the briar hedge? No, better to leave the poor fools to their dreams.

Adam turned away from the sleeping princess and left the bedchamber. He hurried past the royal parents frozen on their thrones, past the gathered court, and out into the still air.

Once outside the building, Adam gulped lungfuls of air. He alone lived and breathed, yet he knew he was the biggest fool in this sleeping paradise.

All his dreams lay one day’s march to the West. Maude, and Boy, shelter and peace. Love, a home, things he had never known. A place to belong to, even the broken town of Consequences.

Leave these poor souls to their dreams. He would go to his.

Adam paced across the wide courtyard, past the sleeping shepherdess and the statue of the blacksmith. He did not pause beneath the archway, did not puzzle over its symbols.

The knotted rope hung from the ladder. He slid the ax into his belt and climbed the rope, hand over hand, boot edges gripping the knots. He pulled himself onto the ladder and swept the ax to hand, ready to battle the briar hedge.

There was no need. The green wall remained as still as the sleepers inside its barrier. No leaf quivered, no tendrils grasped at his feet. He did not stop to wonder but scampered down the ladder and onto the firm earth beyond the briar hedge.

Adam gathered his meager supplies, packed the mule, and removed the animal’s hobbles. He took up the mule’s lead, then looked to the hedge. What of his ladder, a lure for other fools?

The hedge answered him. With a sudden rush, the briar came to life. Hoary branches engulfed the ladder, swallowing it into the green wall. Pole and rung splintered until nothing remained. Only a few raw splinters marked where the ladder had stood. The briar hedge fell silent and still.

Adam Damned turned toward the place he would forever after call home and began to march. The mule followed willingly, not needing to be pulled. Man and mule disappeared into the westering sun, leaving the briar hedge to brood in the solitude of dreams.


Marco Etheridge is a writer of prose, an occasional playwright, and a part-time poet. He lives and writes in Vienna, Austria. His work has been featured in more than eighty reviews and journals across Canada, Australia, the UK, and the USA.“U6 Stories: Vienna Underground Tales” is Marco’s latest collection of short fiction. When he isn’t crafting stories, Marco is a contributing editor and layout grunt for a new ‘Zine called Hotch Potch.

Author website:  https://www.marcoetheridgefiction.com/

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“Ravens Can’t Talk” Fantasy by L. Swartz

"Ravens Can't Talk" Fantasy by L Swartz

Sometimes River talked to Marty, her final human friend, as she walked east up the steep trail behind her house.

“You’d hate what they did to the stream,” River told Marty. “They paved over the part we daylighted and now they’re building townhouses. Can you believe it? Townhouses, here!”

Marty — as stubborn a ghost as she had been a friend — never answered.

Sometimes when River stepped out her door and looked west, she swore she could see Marty waiting for her, solid in teal rain boots regardless of weather. River waved, even though she knew Marty couldn’t wave back.

River and Marty had talked about everything on the way up that long hill — until the cancer got Marty shortly after they celebrated her 82nd birthday. Now it was just River walking, River talking to a ghost.

After Marty, River didn’t try to make new friends.

Young friends talked loudly, as if River were deaf. She wasn’t deaf. The young ones reminded River of their names as if she were demented. She was not. Young ones were careful to only talk about things they thought River was interested in, like their kids or some TV cooking competition. River was interested in astronomy and anarchism and philology and the pre-Columbian indigenous history of the land she lived on; that hadn’t changed when River turned 80.

Friends River’s own age were no better. Even if they didn’t die on her, they were deaf and demented. River got tired of hearing about their grandkids and their TV shows. River got tired of shouting at them and reminding them of her name.

So now River chose to walk alone.

There was always something new to explore in River’s half-wild neighborhood. Downhill, where the river met the ocean, otters sunned themselves on the rows of upended canoes awaiting summer’s tourists. Uphill, the doe River named Tulip, the one with the wound where some long-ago hunter had hit her in the flank, paraded this year’s fawn in front of River. Deep under the canopy of evergreens, a murder of hefty crows hurled good-natured insults at River as she walked through their winter roost.

The deeper River got into her 80s, the more desperately eager she was to breathe every fog-laden breath, touch every scarred bark on every tree, note where a big branch had been torn off by last week’s storm. River always squatted down to check on the sequoia seedlings she had planted, noting their growth, her knees’ protest when she stood up reminding her she’d probably be dead before the seedlings were taller than her.

River felt rich with experience and greedy for more. If only she could have another 20 years, or 30 or 40. She picked up stones from the stream she crossed further up the hill and placed them in circles around her sequoias, practicing a magic she didn’t believe in.

Today, in the meantime, River was alive. On every day when she wasn’t going to die, River was happy with her everyday miracles, free from the baggage of humanity. On lazy days when River skipped her walk, she created her own miracles.

* * *

The little house River had bought at the beginning of her geezerhood came with a shy acre. Half of it was tall trees even older than River. The other half, near her house, was cleared land. River had turned the stupid lawn into a rich buffet of clover and corn and crabapples for the deer and squirrels and birds. The critters knew they were safe with her. River knew they did not mind her watching them through the wavy old glass in her windows.

River had invited the birds first with a few haphazard feeders on the second floor deck. River thought it would be nice to have birds for company while she sipped her coffee at the wobbly metal picnic table. She pictured friendly chirping and graceful flight.

Instead she got Harley Davidson, the harsh-voiced Steller’s jay who demanded more and more peanuts as more and more jays joined him. Soon River was buying peanuts in 20-pound bags, the picnic table was downstairs on the shrinking lawn, and the feeders had taken over the deck, along with planters full of late-blooming pineapple sage for the hummingbirds.

Harley Davidson and his jay friends were first, but not the only visitors. Sweetly gossipy red-winged blackbirds soon joined the impossibly huge crows and the ridiculously patterned towhees. River ordered 50-pound bags of sunflower seeds and cases of suet cakes. Bright goldfinches and flickers and juncos and raspberry-colored finches and red-headed, houndstooth-tailcoated woodpeckers and handsome orange thrushes and squabbling starlings gobbled it all.

Only occasionally did a kestrel or sharp-shinned hawk perch on the peak of the roof and swoop down on an unsuspecting customer at River’s buffet. River grieved, but did not begrudge the raptors their appetite.

Next, Queen Liz, a relentlessly fertile old sow raccoon, led a procession of trash pandas up the posts and onto River’s deck. After a few deliciously successful raids by the raccoons on the peanuts intended for jays and crows, River began to put out dishes of dog food for them.

Queen Liz caught on quickly. She and her kits pressed their hands and faces against the window just before dawn and just after sunset. River obediently filled a dish and handed it to the family. Within a few weeks, all the raccoons in the neighborhood — mostly descendants of Liz, River figured — put River on their route. Sometimes River had to put out two separate dishes to prevent growling generations of raccoons from fighting each other to seize the choicest morsels first.

River tried to attract the local Roosevelt elk herd to her haven by planting aspen and dogwood, but no luck. Even when thinned by hunting season, the herd numbered at least a dozen. River’s human neighbors lived too close to suit the herd.

* * *

Only the boldest neighbor children came near River or her house — visits she suspected were prompted by dares. River sometimes contrived to pose spookily in the upstairs window facing the house across the street where the youngest kids lived: I have earned my eccentricity.

Many nights, River sat in her easy chair facing her reflection in the black windows and chuckled at the wildlife looking back at her: Here lives an old lady who dresses in bright, clashing colors and talks to ghosts and birds. And talk she did.

“Time for you to bring me presents now,” River would say to Harley Davidson. “You are a crow. You’re supposed to bring me shiny things in return for my gifts to you.”

Harley replied with a head toss, a strut, and a leap into the air to flap away, as if to say, Make me.

“Just stay alive,” River whispered to the impudent crow. “That’s all I want from you really.”

And “I won’t hurt you, silly girl,” River cooed to Queen Liz when the ragged raccoon stood up, forepaws outstretched, if River got too close to the kits. “I’m your guardian servant factotum, my friend. Nothing will happen to you on my watch.”

Liz would deflate as if in response. River would tut-tut at her, “Now you bring me some treats. It’s your turn, lady. A cutting from your roses, say. A casserole. Something.” Liz seemed to pause in her chewing to sneer.

River was tempted to pat Liz’s head. She wasn’t like the other raccoons. She was the oldest, a survivor, and she was the smartest and she knew just how to get what she wanted from humans.

* * *

River hated fall mornings. That was when hunters would wake her up shooting at sunrise. River forgave the weekday hunters, who were probably local and genuinely respected their kills and fed the meat to their family. But most of the gunfire happened on weekend mornings. That meant rich people from over the mountain who pursued recreation by killing the geese and ducks who shared the docks with the otters. Or they might be taking down one of the elk. Or it could be Tulip, her flank-wounded friend, or even old Liz, too blind to see which human was approaching. River even worried about the safety of the mama bear who trashed the neighborhood garbage cans and sometimes the not-so-feral cats.

More and more hunters disturbed River’s sleep, yet it did not seem to diminish the numbers of River’s visitors. More and more refugees showed up at River’s sanctuary.

The latest town council election had replaced several seats. The new council repped for the timber company that owned the land uphill from the town. The company always logged the tops of the hills bald, replanted the land, and sprayed the clearcut with chemicals to discourage undergrowth — but now without opposition. The chemicals killed what small prey were left for the predators who hadn’t already lost habitat during the clearcut, along with fish and birds and snakes and toads and squirrels. Both predators and prey fled downhill into the remaining trees and into the town itself. Hungry mountain lions and coyotes finished off the local pets and worked their way down the menu to the sluggish, half-hibernating raccoons and the young deer and the elk yearlings.

River couldn’t blame the predators for being hungry. They owned this town before it was a human town. Nevertheless, she fortified her sanctuary with motion-sensitive lights to discourage the cats. She put out opened jars of vinegar that the coyotes hated to smell. It worked, at least enough so that River didn’t find so many leftovers of their meals on her walks.

The flashing lights and peculiar smells didn’t exactly ruin River’s reputation as a witch among the local children — or their parents. That was fine with River.

River rarely spoke to other humans as she headed into the downhill part of her 80s. Her long-ago therapist would say she was isolating. Accurate enough, River supposed, but it had been decades since she saw that as something wrong with her that needed fixing.

Besides, she wasn’t truly isolated. She had all the company she wanted and needed. Her companions nowadays did die on her — even sooner than her geezer human friends — but they had boundaries. They respected River’s boundaries. And these friends never told her the same story twice.

These friends were more than enough for River, and they showed River she was still important, a creature of great value. Every time a new flock of goldfinches or a wary raccoon boar or fawn showed up in River’s sanctuary, she felt buoyant and immortal. The weekend hunters with their fresh gear, still creased from the store, would not take that away from her.

When a glossy raven, bigger even than the king-size crows she normally fed, parked its thick torso on the porch railing, River was elated. It did not seem inclined to move. It shifted left and right, from foot to foot, but kept its perch as she approached. It stared at River, croaking approvingly when she refilled the peanut feeder.

“I think I’ll call you Poe,” River said to the raven, which was regarding her tilt-headed, no more than two feet away. “I’m River. A pleasure to meet you, Poe.”

And Poe croaked, “Hello.”

And River opened her mouth to say something, but she couldn’t decide what to say.

Poe rattled, “Good morning.”

“You’re not wrong,” River replied, and then she laughed like she hadn’t since Marty died.

“You are River,” Poe said.

“I am. How are you talking to me? Are you talking to me? Am I finally losing it?”

“You are fine. All ravens can talk, fool. We do not talk to humans. Generally.”

“Why not?”

“Seriously?”

“Stupid question. Right. But why talk to me?”

“You are not stupid. And I think you might be why I am here. Partly.”

“But how?”

“How did I get here, you mean?”

“Yes. I guess so. Yes! How?”

“My daughter, who I taught many things although I was a shitty mom, turned me into a raven. She unlocked a forbidden room, which was inevitable, because she is a master thief and there is nothing so tempting to a thief as a forbidden room, and…”

“You were human?”

“On the other side of the other door to the forbidden room, yes. I was human. I was bad at it, but I was human.”

“So you came through the forbidden room after she turned you into a raven.”

“My transformation was the price she paid for her trespass.”

“I see. I am sad that…”

“Do not be sad, fool. I like being a raven. I think I am going to be much better at being a raven than I was at being a human.”

“Well, then, good I guess. But I’m happy you’re here and help yourself to peanuts anytime and I’m thrilled to be talking to a raven who can talk to me, but still: Why me?”

“It is my task to grant your greatest desire. Just one. Not three wishes, that never works out well for anyone. Just one. And no, do not say anything yet. Do not speak. Go to sleep tonight and dream a dream. Dream that your greatest desire has come true. When you wake up, it will be so.”

“But what if I have a nightmare? What if I can’t sleep or don’t dream?”

“You humans like to make up things to worry about.”

“That is true. OK then. I’m going to leave a breakfast of peanuts in the feeder for you before I go to bed, just in case. No matter what happens, thank you.”

Poe let out a decidedly not-human grumble-squawk, leaped off the railing, and swooped across the driveway into the copse of crabapple trees. River could hear her croaking from farther and farther away. A cold rain had started, but River stayed on the deck and breathed in the sanctuary’s sounds and sights and smells until she was drenched.

Then she went to bed.

* * *

River rolled over in bed, opening one eye enough to notice the sky was light. She rolled over in bed and did not groan. Her back felt strong. Her knees and elbows did not hurt. She could see two spiders in detail above her on the high ceiling. Her heart yelled at her brain to dress and go for a walk right away because she could not hear any rain falling.

River sat up and swung her legs over the side of the bed. She stood up. She stretched. She took a deep breath, then another.

Nothing hurt.

She did not feel like climbing back under the covers for another hour.

Nothing. Hurt.

Wait a minute.

Wait. A. Minute.

River remembered last night.

River, not bothering to pull on her sweats over her boxers and tank top, ran to the mirror in the bathroom.

River’s face was smooth. Her lips were full. Her eyebrows where red, not silver. Her hair was auburn, not silver. Her breasts were the famous globes her lovers had adored touching. Her belly was sleek and touchable. Her neck was tight, not stringy. And River could see. River could see everything clearly without pressing her face close to it. River could smell.

River.

Could.

Smell.

The cat box downstairs, one day overdue for a cleaning. The oranges in the bowl on the kitchen counter. The savor of old floorboards above the furnace.

But what about —

River threw the door open and — Petrichor. Pine. Grass clippings. Wet soil.

Everything. Everything was here.

River was here.

River was young. River didn’t have to think about how much she could hurry up and do before she died. River didn’t have to make plans for how her hungry wild friends would get along after she was gone. She was here. She would be here.

She was young.

River was young.

“Poe!” River shouted.

She looked up. An especially large raven, high above her, drifted in a lazy circle. The big bird barely dipped her wing in acknowledgement.

“Peanuts!” Poe yelled, then croaked and croaked and croaked.

Poe did not stop croaking until River, young River, overfilled the tray with so many peanuts they spilled onto the deck.

Poe stood in the middle of the tray and ate peanut after peanut while crows and jays scolded and River laughed.

“You scoundrel,” River said. “Shame on you. And thank you.” “You fool. Ravens can’t talk,” Poe said, then flew away.


L (just L) Swartz intrepidly chronicles fairy tale apostates, arrogant dragons, and shapeshifting ex-lovers. L shares life on the North Coast of Oregon with 1 nonbinary badass partner of 23 years, 3 crime cats, 1 sweet dog, and 1 loud parrot, while feeding every corvid and raccoon in Tillamook County.


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“Grady Painted Water Towers” Micro-fiction by Alan Caldwell

"Grady Painted Water Towers" Micro-Fiction by Alan Caldwell: photo of water tower

Grady painted water towers.

He dangled in human bird cages secured by ropes. He moved from town to town, traveling with crews who followed the work. Sometimes in the early spring or fall, the sun glared off the white paint, blinding his eyes but feeling pleasantly warm on his back. Some winter days his hands were so cold he couldn’t grasp the rollers. In summer, the dog-day heat stole his water, his urine stream weak and dark. The men who painted water towers spoke of falls. Each carried stories, macabre stories about men bursting apart on impact, men impaled on fences. The farther a man fell, the luckier he was, they said, a soaring, and then a painless blackness. The men joked that they feared the stop but not the fall.

Grady had a wife. She waited tables and then waited in her cornflower blue dress, moving the curtains aside when she heard his truck tires crunching the gravel. Grady had a son, his hair curly and dark like his father’s. Grady always brought the boy a surprise when he returned, a bag of candy, a Matchbox car, and finally a bike, a Huffy with a breadloaf seat. He ran behind the boy as he pedaled on the gravel, his hand on the boy’s back, finally freeing the boy when he could maintain his own balance.

Grady fell from a worn cage in Waycross, an early Autumn storm blowing the platform away from the edge, Grady leaning to grasp the guide rope. He wasn’t lucky; he fell less than twenty feet, no time to soar and no blackness, just a cracking sound, a pain above his belt that stole his breath, a four hour ride in a pickup bed, swaddled in painter’s tarps. Grady lay in the bed for three weeks, the trailer smelling like sweat and sickness. He took the pills, and he slept, and then took the pills and slept again. He awoke and swooned and slept again and when he awoke again they were gone, they were all gone, the cornflower blue dress, the Matchbox cars, and the bike with the breadloaf seat.

Grady traded pills for a ride to the pharmacy for more pills. Then he slept, and when he awoke, the pills were as gone as the dress, the cars, and the bike with the breadloaf seat. Then they came looking for the pills that were gone and beat him for hiding the pills he no longer possessed. Then they came again, and beat him again, and told him to leave and come back when he had more pills.

Grady left, stumbling west along Highway 78, his left leg dragging a trail through the Autumn leaves that gathered along the shoulder. Grady shuffled and faltered. Some time after he turned north, Grady noticed that he was being followed, a tall and lean dog, black with white socks, a white spot on his forehead shaped like a heart.

Grady and the dog rested, and then slept, beneath an aged and sagging church pavilion. 

When they awoke, an old man in overalls was raking sweetgum balls from the gravel on the ancient graves.  

The old man helped Grady and his dog into the cab of his truck. Behind the old man’s trailer was another trailer, older and smaller than the first, but clean, a large tulip poplar dropping its yellow leaves on the trailer’s roof. The old man unlocked the door and led Grady and the dog inside. The earth tones comforted Grady and the rooms smelled neither of sweat or sickness. A pitcher of water and a loaf of unsliced bread waited on the table.


Alan Caldwell has been teaching for 29 years, but only began submitting his writings last May. He has been published in almost two dozen journals and magazines since. 


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“Foot of Thy Womb” Surreal Short Story by Gretchen Gormley

"Foot of Thy Womb" Surreal Fiction by Gretchen Gormley: photo of two eggs  frying

Shuffling socks down to the kitchen. Mindlessly pour coffee, stir in cream until it’s a burnt golden brown, like that will soften the fact that I don’t like coffee and have never been able to acquire the taste. Wince at the bitterness.

The world is quiet outside the house. Beyond the kitchen window, the neighborhood stretches out endlessly, squat and sunbaked in the Georgia summer. Alphabet houses. Neat hedges. It’s the same house, the same neighborhood I grew up in, but it feels different to live here alone. Gillsville is a small enough town that it can shrink down all around you. 

A bicyclist drifts down the road. Lazy. Slow, like the motion of a great cloud.

Breakfast. Two eggs rolling on the countertop. Place a spoon crosswise—stop them from falling to the floor. Turn the burner up. 

I should wait for it to sizzle hot, should wait for it to heat more than the lukewarm sun as it pours through the window, but I don’t have the patience. The omelette will be damp and floppy, but it will be fast. 

Crack one egg against the side, thumb against heating metal to keep yolk from dripping down into burner. Watch the egg pool and congeal, yellow like a child’s drawing of a sun in the center of the pan. Sunday school coloring books. Crack the second. 

A strange noise, one that doesn’t belong to eggs or kitchens. It could possibly belong to a hospital’s birthing ward, raw and wet and vital.

I look down. It looks up.

An eye, swimming in the egg whites that surround it. Yolk clumps thick and yellow at one edge. A bit of blood is seeping out into my breakfast. 

Vomit tastes acidic and rotten on my tongue as I bend over the trashcan, sweating palms pressed against fuzzy pajama pants. A glass of water filled by the sink tap. Swish it and spit. 

The longer I don’t look at the pan, the longer I can pretend there’s only poorly cooking eggs in it. But something is hissing like bacon on the stove, and the smell of cooking flesh hits my nostrils. 

I turn the burner off and look back at the thing in the pan.

A slow blink—no eyelid, but a slimy film, not unlike the egg whites surrounding it. It bobs, rotating and rolling in the pan.

I think it’s looking at me.

Not looking at me like someone might look at me across the street. Looking. The way the priest looks at you after you say something awful in confession. When you don’t even need to see a face to feel the eyes.

Breathe in, push nausea down. Tell myself it’s some poorly formed mutant chicken, a tragedy of factory farming. Blinking because the heat of the pan is creating some expansion or burning that simulates motion. Grab the pan and tip it over the trash can.

I take the spoon, scrape metal against metal. Watch eggs slump down into garbage on top of sick, the eye lost. Folded in with the mess.

It’s been years since I prayed, but I consider it now. Father, Son, Holy Spirit. Eye In My Trashcan. I wonder if the words would still come on reflex, summoned up from eighteen years of godliness.

My mouth still tastes like vomit.

Slippers are soft under my feet as I slide them on. Trash bag crinkles as I haul it up and sling it with me out the door. Not quite full yet; plastic sags. Why take out the trash when it’s not full yet?

Because the sun is nice on my shoulders as I step outside. Because I was already going out to grab the mail. Because the garbage truck comes tomorrow and what if I forget to do it later? Because I don’t want it in my kitchen. Not when it could be staring back, every time my eyes dart that way.

Take it out to the big trash bin, swing it over the edge and scrunch my nose at the smell as I close the lid down. Grab the mail and go back inside. Slow paces. Not running.

Not running. Not running when I press my back against the coolness of the fridge and slide down to the kitchen floor. Blood into egg yolks slammed in front of my eyes. Hug my knees to my chest. Not running.

It’s on the television when I get home from work the next day.

I’m curled up on the sofa, hands warmed by the plate of my microwave burrito. Fingers sore from hauling around the big canned soup crates at the grocery store. I’m thumbing through channels when I see it, and my burrito goes sour.

The story is this: A local woman was taking communion, and a piece of bread was a fat lump of flesh in her mouth. Everyone is talking about miracles.

They say it’s a sign of God in the modern times.

Father, Son, Eye In The Trash, Flesh In The Mouth. Holy Spirit. 

A week later, they’re having a big party at the church down the road. The church I went to every Sunday as a child. To celebrate. I put on a dress that feels foreign and scratchy against my skin, eggshell blue like I used to wear when I stood between my parents and my sister Mary during mass. Mother, Father, Mary. Judith. Picture perfect, every week.

I haven’t been to this place in two years. I think I could probably walk the way with my eyes closed. It looks the same as it always has, from the simple white chapel to the wide green lawn to the smiling faces. 

The only differences: the fervor living on everyone’s tongue, and the fact that the lawn is decorated like it would be for a birthday party. Picnic tables all laid out with paper plates and pot luck Tupperware, balloons tethered in bunches. The smell of hot dogs cooking somewhere. 

I see my sister and her husband hand in hand as she speaks to some of the other women of the congregation. I want to gravitate her way out of sheer awkwardness, but she’s deep in conversation. Father Lowe is shaking hands near the front stoop of the chapel, and I avoid his eyes as I navigate my way through the crowd. I take a plate and sit between two women who used to pinch my cheeks when I was little. 

“It’s been so long since we’ve seen you, Judith,” one is saying, and the other is saying “I’m so glad you’ve returned to the flock,” and I wonder why I came. The small talk is like cardboard and the food is the same. 

There’s a little girl pouring lemonade on rice crispy treats a few seats away from me, fingers and face sticky. Any appetite I had is long gone.

I would say I only came because my sister invited me, but then, she’s invited me to a thousand community cookouts and block parties on this lawn, and I’ve never come before. Maybe I showed up because the trash collector missed my house this week. The bin is still standing at the end of my driveway.

“Judy?” My sister calls when she finally spots me. Her voice is warm and excited, and I feel my grimace turn into an actual smile. “I didn’t think you would come! I haven’t seen you in ages, you should really come around more often.”

I disentangle myself from the picnic table, and Mary is hustling over the lawn to me—I say hustling, but she’s not actually moving that fast with her eight and a half months pregnant belly weighing her down. She’s smiling wide, though, and she pats my back fondly when she wraps her arms around me.

“We had lunch together last week,” I remind her. 

“Still!” She insists. “I’m glad you came. I mean I suppose you’d have to be crazy not to come back for this. Even out-of-towners have been driving by to have mass with us. Though, I think most of them probably just want to see the Bishop when he comes. A Bishop! Here in Gillsville! I wish Mom was here to see it, you know?”

She’s right that our mom would probably cry if she heard about something so big happening in our little town. Gillsville has one newspaper, and the biggest story we’ve ever gotten here was a particularly big cabbage. Now, we’re showing up on national news networks. 

She would probably throw a whole party of her own at me going back to church, whether or not I was going to mass or just eating the stale hot dogs. 

“We should have lunch again,” I say to change the topic. “I could make—”

A retching noise, and conversations pause. Heads swivel. 

The little girl with the sticky face is doubled over, mother fussing and holding her hair back as she throws up onto the fresh mowed grass. Her mom pets her face and swings her up onto her hip, expression turning exasperated when she glances to the table and sees the awful junk her daughter was combining on her plate. 

The crowd moves away from the vomit, and some of the regular volunteers are getting cleaning gloves and trash bags to handle the mess. 

I’ve turned back to my sister, and they begin to cry out.

A wordless shout. 

Then: “Lord, Lord! Oh my Lord!”

Look back. People are on their knees.

“It’s—It’s—Holy God”

They’re crossing themselves. 

Words are falling reverent from Father Lowe’s mouth. “Glory be to the Father, and to the Son, and to the Holy Spirit. As it was in the beginning, is now, and ever shall be, world without end—”

I look down at the grass. At the vomit they’re kneeling for. 

A strip of meat. Pink. Alive, twitching. 

A tongue. 

Around it, pearly teeth gleam in the sick. 

I turn around and I walk home. Down the street and past the trashcan still sitting at the end of my driveway. I guess I was right that I could do it with my eyes closed, because I don’t remember a single step of the way. 

The party was meant to go from noon ’til six on Friday, but it doesn’t even slow down until Saturday night. I can hear the noise even from my kitchen, can see the fervor growing as the news coverage lasts all day. 

Everyone is talking about miracles, but I’m thinking about that eye floating in my eggs. My mom always said that when angels appeared, they said ‘Be Not Afraid.’ Because sometimes what’s wonderful terrifies us. 

But when I think about that little bit of blood mixing with yolk, I can’t help it. My gut feels queasy and my hands sweat like mad. I’m afraid.

Plastic gloves. An hour shifting through the bin. A plastic bag inside a paper bag inside an empty snack box. Bury it and mark it with a stone. 

They canonize the First Miracle of Gillsville on the same day that my sister calls crying. She was supposed to have her baby. Only, instead of a baby it was just a man’s left foot.

At first I think she’s sobbing, but when the phone static dies down I realize she’s saying grace, again and again she’s saying grace. 

My nephew was going to be named Joey, after his dad. He was going to wear little pajamas I knitted for him. He was going to have a nursery painted green. Not blue, because my sister hates all that ‘pink for girls, blue for boys’ crap. Not pink, because that’s for girls. 

But grief isn’t mine to have here, and my sister doesn’t seem to want any. I go to see her in the hospital and she’s still smiling and weeping and saying grace. 

They’ve wrapped a baby blanket around the foot. I almost ask her if it’s still going to be called Joey, but instead I just pat her hand and smooth her hair from her face. 

I’ve never heard of the Consulta Medica before, but apparently they’re a big deal. They swarm around my sister’s bedside running tests and asking questions. They’re here to see if it’s a miracle. They handle the foot so carefully you would think it was the second coming. 

I don’t know why they go through all the tests. They could’ve just gone home after seeing that the foot had a pulse. But it takes three days before my sister is on the news talking to a Bishop and holding up the swaddled appendage like a proud mother. 

I guess they had to check to see if it was the real deal. 

It turns out it is, because the next one that comes to town is the pope. 

News vans swarm when the pope comes to Gillsville. Streets are crowded. Everyone’s renting out their spare rooms for all the tourists. They all wish the place was bigger, or that we could move it a town over. But it’s not happening a town over, it’s happening here. 

I go to mass with my sister and her husband. The chapel is so crowded that they set three extra rows of folding chairs behind the pews. Any other time, and I would have to endure all the smug satisfaction from the community at my return, but everything is hectic and there are so many new faces that no one looks my way as I take a seat to Mary’s right. 

When people hear I stopped going to church, they normally think I stopped going because I stopped believing in God. They’re wrong. I stopped going to church for two reasons. The first is that just because I believe in God doesn’t mean I believe he’s good. The second is that there is something wrong with me. 

The altar boys walk between the pews, hands laden with incense and censer, bread and wine. Father Lowe follows after, head bowed. Then the visiting Bishop. 

Guess the big man’s too big for our little church. I’m not surprised, though some people look disappointed. The pope has bigger fish to fry than our small town mass. He may be here, but he’ll be some fifteen miles out in a hotel and surrounded by his own secret service.

The congregation settles back down as it begins.

Stand. Hands raised. Sit. The Liturgy of The Word. 

Everyone is talking about miracles. That includes Father Lowe. Proof of God on earth. Father, Son, Foot of The Womb. Hail Mary, first and second. 

I knew about my sister, and I knew about the teeth and tongue. What I didn’t know about was the hands they found inside a butchered lamb, the growth that turned from a tumor into a man’s arm, the right foot that doctors found in the place of some poor girl’s appendix. 

Then the Bishop. Word from the pope, he says. 

We’re supposed to put Him together. 

Stand. Sit. Hands clasped together, raised to the ceiling. Watch as Mary takes communion and stay in my seat. I don’t want any bit of holiness in my mouth. If I did, I would’ve eaten my omelet. 

Hug my sister goodbye after pleasantries. Walk home. Pick up the stone, move the earth. Look into the eye, gunky and caked in blood. Still looking right at me. Same way Father Lowe looked at me when I left confession wishing I could jam words back into my mouth. When I told him about a girl I met at summer camp, and the fact that there is something wrong with me.

Tuck it back into the paper bag. Place it between my heel and the earth and crush down. Back into the box, back into the ground. 

Who He is, I don’t know. What I do know is, He’ll be missing an eye.

A Pope, a bishop, and a disembodied hand walk into a church service. It sounds like the start of a bad joke. Maybe it will be, one day, and I just haven’t come up with the punchline yet. Only the hand doesn’t walk so much as twitches while they carry it. A little white box and it’s lain out like in a bed.

A sharp inhale to my right, and my sister is clutching me. I don’t look her way. I watch as they bring the hand to the altar, as they remove it from the box and place it at the wrist. It’s not the last piece, not by far, but—

But there He is. The shape of Him. 

Set out like for an open casket, a funeral in reverse. The torso is there, the legs set carefully beneath. There’s little Joey at the ankle, alongside his twin. There’s a head, still strange and misshapen. Hairless, a mouth but no lips. 

Father, Son. Foot of The Womb, Flesh of The Mouth. Holy Spirit. They said Jesus would come back to us, but I guess they never said he wouldn’t come in pieces.


Gretchen Gormley (they/them) is a writer based in British Columbia where they are studying creative writing and literature. They were a semi-finalist for the 2020 North Street Book Prize under the pen name Celia King, and they were the winner of UBC’s 2023 ESA short story competition.


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“Breakdown” Short Story by Larry D. Thacker

"Breakdown" Fiction by Larry D. Thacker: Sunrise in KY mountains

The rut was too deep for Alder’s car. He knew it the instant he hit it, but he’d been too determined and stubborn, moving too fast to make careful adjustments. The car hit fast at the wrong angle, bounced the frontend, and slammed down, the feeling and sound of a hard cracking thump vibrating through the floor panel into his feet. It was over that quickly. 

Steaming antifreeze puffed and streamed out with a jet, up from the front grill, from underneath. It was like a smoke bomb, lifting and trailing in the wind down the thin road and curling off the cliff to his right. He knew what he’d done. Antifreeze has a distinct sickening scent. 

Ahead were higher hills. Nothing behind them but clean, cold sky. Kentucky sky. Behind him was nothing but Virginia. He’d gotten so close.  

The road had worsened the longer he’d tempted his luck after finding the mining gate wide open, after driving past the weekend’s inactive equipment and pallets of stacked material, into areas void of trees, the grounds along the roads barely organized into naked eroded soil. He’d taken one of four branching muddied graveled roads up into smaller treeless hollows. The road thinned, leaving no choice but to continue up, hoping for an eventual wider spot for switching back and getting out of the mess he knew was getting worse every hundred yards. But the higher and further he pushed the vehicle, the more distracting the surroundings became. And now he was stranded. He knew that before even checking.         

Keeping the car running just long enough, he pulled forward, scraping along the frozen rut, and parked on what little shoulder there was along the road’s narrowness and killed the engine before it could seize up. An earthen cliff, only a few inches from his tires, fell at least a hundred feet to another winding route in this web of road. 

No one was around. Why would there be? It was a Sunday. 

Stay calm, he ordered himself. Breathe. And think. He stared out over the hood of the car at the distant hills, smirking. So close.  

The door gave a cold, rusty squeak as he opened it. He swung his feet over and out. The ground was a cold hard, an ungiving stiffness that hurt his toes. The dread of that feeling was already creeping in, a memory of frostbite from years before. He’d neglected reacting to the numbness in his left foot for too long during one of several stints along the South Korean side of the DMZ. It was in mountains just like this, steep and treeless. It wasn’t until he got to a warm place and his feet started thawing and stinging and pulsing in a strange way, like they were on fire, that the medic declared how he’d be lucky to save the two darkening toes turning pretty shades of blue and black. Now those toes were always what got cold first on his body. A sign of things to come, like bones aching before bad weather.    

The walk out of here would do him good, even in the cold. Wake him up and teach him a lesson. He tapped a smoke out of his pack and fought the wind and lit it and leaned against the car feeling calmer than he probably should have, grinning at how the hood’s heat warmed his hand. The cigarette smoke took on a life of its own, joining the gray smoke now swirling up from his wheel wells and the vent between the hood at the windshield. A warm, sickening steam. Sweet. No wonder a dog would lap up anti-freeze. He stood there in it, letting its warmth coat him for a moment. He was already getting cold. He’d miss this little bit of heat down the road no matter how much it stunk.   

If there was a time he needed cell coverage it was now, but he knew better. He tried. No signal. Things were instantly more complicated. You’d think a more isolated spot would warrant more tower coverage. But then, who would he call? 

Hey there, mom? I’m broke down two hours from you, can you come get me? 

She would have tried, but he would never have asked. 

Hello, officer, yeah I know it’s Sunday afternoon, but do you know any tow companies working out in the middle of nowhere? Maybe the embarrassment of it all made him hesitant.

He’d canceled his roadside service months ago to save a few dollars. 

Thinking there might be someone around, he listened. Called out. Some four wheelers in the distance revved up, their noise faint through the radiator’s hiss. The wind sung in his ears and stung his skin. The sun was warm in places up here, warm enough to stave off the cold for part of the walk out. 

He took another drag off his cigarette and went to the front of the car, got on all fours, his hands sinking into the thawing muck, and eyed the area under the engine. The anti-freeze’s fog barreling out into his face made his stomach turn, tearing his eyes. He pulled his hands back, avoiding the steaming green river of fluid snaking its way across the icy mud. Most of the ground was solid, but wet enough to soak cold through the knees of his jeans, running cold up his legs. He went back and sat in his car with the door closed, trying to use up what little warmth was left. He stuffed a leftover granola bar in a pocket. He flipped the collar of his coat and got out and walked away from his smoldering car. 

He halted after a few steps. What was he noticing? Nothing. That’s what it was. There was no hint of life from where he stood. No sound but wind. No houses, no people, no animals. No animals. No movement. The destruction here had driven away anything resembling normalcy. It was disturbing, even more desolate than the cleared no-man’s land look in spots along the DMZ stretching between South and North Korea. He’d memorized that scene after so many days and nights patrolling in weather easily colder than this. At least you could see topsoil and a little movement along the zone, though it was the most armored and dangerous piece of real estate in the world. At least some trees and life lived there. 

Trees had lived here, once. He could feel what was left of them under his feet, buried root balls of monster trees, pushed around and covered, compacted by lesser minded animal machines. Yes, there were trees, and everything else, all the green replaced with wintered dirt and clay and rock. A complete vacuuming up of the earth, pushed around, away. Out of sight. For some unseen purpose.        

The cold snapped him from his daydream, and he stumbled down the way getting a feel for the road. It was crisp slush, frozen brown and black mixes of mud and gravel, fist-sized and smaller chunks of coal scattered about, driven over and stabbed into mud. Frozen dirt crunching underfoot. Gray snow patched spots along the road’s edges. He knew there was asphalt down the hill. Walking would be easier then. This was coal mine property, but where the hell were the mines? Far down these webs of tiny roads he reckoned. 

A stiffer wind whipped up and the sun was gone at the first turn off the hill as he stepped into the mountain’s shadow. It wasn’t quite freezing, but what’s the difference in twenty-five or thirty-five degrees. Miserable or very miserable. At some point it doesn’t matter. Numb is numb.     

He’d never been around this sort of mining and didn’t have a clue what he was seeing. The hill was steep and high to his right with a cliff dropping off his left like a sheer cut wall. It appeared to be more of a strip job operation than an underground mine, but his view was limited, even from here, and he couldn’t see any real work going on. No large spots of coal were evident around these dug up swaths of land. More like they were staging areas or routes out for something much more serious going on further out into the hills.  

Across the valley and up another mountain, behind another flattened hill, past a stripe of evergreens and leafless trees, was a ribbon of exposed earth, a bulldozer, mounds of dirt and tangled trees. The top of that hill was intact. A broad body with a head of trees with treeless vertical shoulders and a scarf of trees, green, gray, then brown-yellow, and green again. 

Below the drop off to his left was mostly flattened overturned earth with three roads headed up the hollow into thinner valleys. The top of one of the smaller hills was perfectly flat, a single tree clinging sideways from a bank by stubborn roots. 

There were splotches of missing foliage, both sides of the roads disturbed in one way or other a hundred feet out on each side. He wondered where the mining actually happened. Some heavy equipment sat idle in groups of twos and threes well up the roads. A crane strung a lynched generator thirty feet in the air. He wondered if they left the keys in these machines. Do they even use keys in these things? He looked into the crane’s massive control compartment. The cab, big as his car, full of levers and knobs and unlit controls.  

He’d walked long enough to feel the numbness creeping in. His steps crunched on the road, the scrapes and bumps painful through the sole of his boots as his toes and heels numbed, the cold ache working into the arch of the feet, then the ankles to his shins. Before he managed to walk very far, he regretted his ignorant try at the mountain even more. No chance at a story was worth this.  

His pant leg bottoms were caked and stiffening before long, his boots heavy in clumps. The gusts of air burnt his face, drying and tightening his skin. His eyes squinted with tears. 

He got back to the gate, the quiet equipment, the unmanned guard shack. He peered through one of its dust caked windows, sheltering behind the building and watching his breath jet away in foggy shots. It was tiny, with CB radios on the wall, a phone, windows on three sides and the door. A desk was layered in unorganized papers and clipboards. A small space heater sat on the floor, unplugged. The guard was either a slob or no one had worked there in a while. A manual rested on the desk by a telephone holding down a stack of newspapers. He thought about testing the door, turning on the heat and trying the phone, but thought better of it. The last thing he needed was someone accusing him of breaking and entering. 

It would have been nice if someone had been there before, halted him at the gate. 

Buddy, only a dumbass would take that car up in there, and besides, you’re not allowed. Turn around and have a nice Sunday afternoon. 

He’d have taken that advice, maybe gotten a lead, asked him about the mystery lights up on Black Mountain, why he was there in the first place, then went on about an uneventful day. Turned around and went back into town for some coffee after a friendly conversation with all the mysteries of the mountain lights laid out for him by a kind and bored guard. He’d have settled for that.  

The mud and gravel morphed back to cracked pavement, like fractured, cold desert floor. He walked on until there were trees finally overhead and sheltering the walk, spinning their leafless frames from one side to the other, joining and mingling hands, holding back the sun’s warmth. A quick running creek mirrored the road to the left, murmured at him as he walked. He tried staying along the left shoulder on the grass, but the thick black dust and frozen mud pushed him back onto the road. Eventually there was no evidence of the mine property behind him, and he didn’t look back. The scene was in his head enough, in the form of a new question. 

He finally noticed a house up ahead. He was relieved to see movement in the yard, a man in jeans and a denim work coat and cap walking out, checking something in the bed of a truck, rummaging around, turning, glancing in Alder’s direction and going back in. When he got there and started into the yard a black pit bull raised its head and stared from the porch. Alder hesitated in the street. I hope you’re tied up, he whispered. Just don’t chase me, he begged under his breath. I couldn’t run if I had to. 

Alder kept on, frustrated, turning his head from the animal’s eyes, feeling its stare through the back of his head, trying not to challenge the dog’s space. He tried walking like he lived around these parts, casual but determined on a cold day. With somewhere to be. Almost past the house, Alder sensed movement from the porch out of the corner of his eye. He angled his head slightly, catching a glimpse of a curtain peeking open. Someone was checking him out. 

The dog caught his slight glance and let out a startling drum of alarms. It jumped to all fours, cold slobber stringing from its ratcheting jaws. Alder picked up the pace. The barking set off two more dogs in the direction he was headed. At least there were more houses coming up. 

Seven houses in a row, two on the left, five on the right, were identical, except for one painted red and another with green siding. The only real differences were the plants on the porches and the landscaping. A concrete yard statue here and there. A frozen birdbath. Different cars and trucks in front along the road or in muddy driveways. What made them most similar was the hardened gray dust coating them. Blackish smoke seeped out from most of the chimneys, hovering near the roofs before the wind pushed it up the hollow or back into the woods. He could tell from the smell they were burning coal. The smell was unmistakable. Acrid, choking, the gritty taste coating his tongue. 

He was finally to a Y in the road with several houses. Now was the time to ask for help. Surely someone would be out. Hopefully they’d look approachable. Hopefully he’d look approachable, too. Rude or not, I want out of this jam before I freeze to death, he thought, putting on a smile and looking around, hoping he looked as lost as he felt.    

A screen door groaned and slammed. A comforting sound. An elderly lady in her long plaid housecoat, hunched, moved slowly and steady as she struggled a bag of trash out the front door of her doublewide. The heavy bag was about as big as her. She carefully took the steps, setting both feet on each level, the bag plopping down behind her near ready to burst. A little dog trotted along at her heals, yipping at the bag. Alder was standing in the road next to her mailbox, near her trashcans. She kept coming and didn’t see him. 

He cleared his throat. “Hello there?” 

The dog halted in its tracks, commenced barking and bolted away behind her, tangled in the lady’s feet and nearly tripped her, all the while the lady, also startled, let out a yelp louder than the dog’s, elevating her head from the hunched position, saw him and let go of the heavy bag of garbage she was dragging, almost dropping it on the retreating dog.      

“I’m so sorry I startled you, ma’am.”   

She seemed embarrassed for letting out her little scream, rubbing her chest. 

“Startled me?” she shouted in her little voice up to his face, “You scared hell outta me, young man! You a preacher or somethin?” 

He wasn’t expecting that reaction and he didn’t get her joke.

“I’m sorry? No, I’m not a preacher…” 

She rolled her eyes.

“I said,” she began slowly, “you scared the hell out of me. So you must be a preacher, right? It was a joke, young man.” She laughed in a pitying way and rolled her eyes again. “That used to be a common joke,” she smirked.     

“Oh. I’m sorry. Really. Here, let me help with your trash.” He picked up the bag and carried it the rest of the way and tossed it into one of her three 55-gallon drums.       

“It’s a mite cold for you to be out in the elements, ain’t it?” she asked, her hands on her hips in a friendly, but judgmental stance.  

“It’s pretty cold for you to be having to drag trash out, too,” he countered in a friendly way.   

She grinned, arching up to see him clearly.   

“Well, they come on Mondays early. The dogs get in it if I miss pickup day,” she said, still catching her breath.   

Alder took the chance. He was pretty cold and miserable by now. There was a little short bed truck beside the doublewide.   

“I broke down up on a mine road. My radiator’s busted up.”  

“It’s a cold day to be breakin down. Course breaking down ain’t no fun no matter when it happens. But I’d rather it in the spring at least, wouldn’t you?”  

“Yes, ma’am.” he agreed. “That would’ve suited me better.”   

She made a sucking sound on her teeth, obviously thinking on something, reaching her head up again and staring, like she was looking through him. Alder stood straight, giving her time to size him up as a stranger hinting politely for help.    

“Well, we can drive my truck into town. Ain’t you cold?” 

He thought she might invite him in, which would have been too awkward for him to accept.  

“Let’s get you into town then, young’un, so you can warm up.” 

No invite in. She was friendly but not stupid. They walked to the truck. She had the keys in her housecoat pocket.   

“Where exactly you wantin to go? I ain’t takin you to Hang Rock. I don’t drive that far.”  

“I don’t know this place. I’d just like a place to warm up that’s got a phone. Get my car looked at and get on home.”  

“Not much open on a Sunday. There’s a diner in town. They’ve got the best food. And they’ve got a phone, too, if Dillard’s paid the bill. And Lord, they keep it burnin hot,” she added. “You’ll warm up nicely in there.”   

“You get me to town and I’ll take it from there. I’m just glad for the offer.” He made for her side of the truck to get her door. She shooed him away.  

“Don’t you fret none,” she said, sizing him up some more as he climbed into the passenger seat. “It’s Sunday everywhere,” she said, “The Lord’s watches closer today.” She grinned a wide grin, her way of acknowledging she was taking a chance on a stranger, but under God’s watchful eye.   

The tiny dog ran up from hiding and leapt into her lap before she slammed the door, twice. It made a metal-on-metal sound each time, startling the dog once again. It gave Alder a narrow-eyed once over.  

“Hmph. Some watch dog. I’ll trade you for another mean cat,” she muttered. The inside of the truck was warmer already. She apologized for the heater not working too well.    

It was only two miles, but she was a slow driver, weaving out of her lane and straddling the middle of the road, swerving when cars approached. She threw up a hand and waved as they passed laying on their horns. He tried to distract himself from the possibility of them not making it to town. 

“I’m Alder,” he offered, keeping a nervous eye on the road. “Can I help you with some gas for your trouble?”   

“This thing won’t burn no gas between here and there. Don’t worry. But thank you, though.” She didn’t offer her name. “Nice to meet you, Alder.” 

“Let me ask you, why were you up there in all that anyways. That’s the mines. I don’t think you work up there.”  

“No, I don’t.” 

“Was it worth getting stuck?”

So far it wasn’t.   

“I’m here to write a story.”   

“For what?” 

“A newspaper back home. In Labortown.”  

“Never been there that I remember. Don’t read the papers much.”  

He didn’t push it. If she wanted to talk he reckoned she would. The dog just sat still on her lap the whole way, staring, panting, baring its teeth occasionally to remind him to stay where he was. Alder didn’t make any sudden moves. Little dogs were the meanest he’d ever seen. You could fight a big dog off, like a person. A tiny mutt with a Napoleon complex would eat you up and have you bleeding to death from scratches before you could find where it was on you.   

He figured she might eventually ask what he was writing about, curious why this stranger was getting stuck and bumming rides. 

“So you’re a newspaper man, huh?” she asked. 

Alder nodded a little proudly.  

“You up there nosin around about the water?” 

“No ma’am.” 

“Them explosions? The dang equipment runnin through all hours of the night?”

“Well, no, ma’am.” 

“Layoffs?”

“No.” 

“What then?” she wondered. 

“Lights,” Alder said. “Mysterious lights. Around Black Mountain.” 

“Lights?” she laughed. “You mean like aliens and silliness like that?” 

Alder was careful how he continued. 

“Not UFOs in that sense. No. Just reports of strange lights.”

The woman scoffed. “First, you weren’t even close to Black Mountain. Second, everybody around here’s heard about them lights. You ain’t the first to wonder on them, young man.” 

“You have an opinion of what the lights are?” 

“I do,” the woman said, “I reckon everybody’s got an opinion on what they are.” 

After that, nothing. She quit talking. She’d lean up and glance to the sky and shake her head. It was killing Alder, but he didn’t push it. 

Where she dropped him off was one of the only places with any sign of life. A diner on the main street that reminded him of the Waffle Hut back home, only homier. He hopped out. 

“I thank you,” he said, closing the truck door, twice.       

She studied him a second and spoke. “Well, I figured you’d need a ride when I saw you comin down the road. Jenkins up there called me and told me to watch for ya. He’d have offered you a ride but he was gettin ready for work.” 

She grinned an all-knowing grin and told him goodbye and to be careful. 

“Make sure you try some of Faith’s chocolate pie in there,” she advised as she pulled out into the road without looking. She was laughing. Alder stood there letting it settle in that he hadn’t, in fact, startled the lady at all back there in her yard. The little dog hopped up on its front paws behind the passenger seat window and let out a string of high-pitched yelps at him as she sped off toward the only other place with any sign of life, the Family Time Thrift Mart.


Larry D. Thacker is a Kentuckian writer, artist, educator, and reality actor, hailing from Johnson City, Tennessee. His poetry and fiction can be found in over 200 publications including SpillwayPoetry South, The American Journal of Poetry, Appalachian Heritage, and Still: The Journal.  His three fiction collections include Working it Off in Labor CountyLabor Days, Labor Nights: More Stories, and Everyday, Monsters (co-written with CM Chapman). His poetry includes four full poetry collections, Drifting in AweGrave Robber ConfessionalFeasts of Evasion, and Gateless Menagerie, two chapbooks, Voice Hunting and Memory Train. He is also the author of the non-fiction folk history, Mountain Mysteries: The Mystic Traditions of Appalachia. He is a cast member on the new Netflix original series, Swap Shop. His MFA in poetry and fiction is earned from West Virginia Wesleyan College. Visit his website at: www.larrydthacker.com


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